don't make sense? you're fake and dense now listen up rookie

I feature physical strength but you a creature need critical sense I wear suits that provide beauty you just a prostitute with a jive booty hell go strut butt softy you don't rhyme well

Yeah whateva son. I got plans today b but as soon as I get back lets battle.

Anyway, thanks everyone, uppin

Damn, you had some good metas...I was feelin this shit. You need to work on ya flow and structure a lil bit, but the content in the verse is pretty syck. I esp liked these lines:

Change of pace shots will change ya face/
I got you scared like michael jackson wantin to change ya race/

My nines will spray, from far away harmin gays/
I'll bring ya weak spit game to a hault like a rain delay/
LOL that was some funny shit...

Keep spittin, dont listen to the haters on here.

ok verse nice lyrics i was feelin it....be original

Thanks for the love. I'mma start gettin into some battles when I get some time.

Uppin......again......I love tha feedback.

ayo, curtendz, that line bout drop top convertible was hot as hell