ok this was a good battle hoops you had a good struture, i liked your punches and your lines were funny

e-dubz you were good to i just didnt like the beggining of it hoops won the beginning but you started taking over toward the end so you got my vote

vote=e-dubz

2-2.. damn yo, neck and neck.............im lovin it











UPPIN MORE VOTES... only 3 more votes needed... lets get this battle over with

close battle..keep da votes comin, leave links we will return da favor

yea..uppin this ish.. leave links and we will hit up your battles

aight this was a pretty tight battle... both of yall came hard at eachother.. imma go with hoops on dis one because he had better punches and personals and a better structure/ rhyme shceme.. i loved this line:

respect my field,stabbin you with anthrax cant "inject" you ill..
since you givin birth to wack lines,heres contraceptive pills..

that line was sick dawg... nice drop... no hate to E but this was hoops battle dawg.. good battle for both of you...

VOTE- HOOPS

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yo edubz: i see you tried to use some good multi's but half didnt make sense or they didnt hit hard...The best-for-eats..please tell me what that means....
structure was bad... 5/10
your flow was sick though 8/10
your punches werent hittin as hard 5.5/10
your personals were hittin though 7/10
the meta's werent good but u tried 6/10

Hoops: heres a tip..when you spit dont space your lines..it looks ugly
your structure wasnt thatgood but better then his 6.5/10
your punches were hittin harder then his 8/10
your personals were pretty good aswell 8/10
seen couple meta's the flock of chickens was aiight nothin too good 6.5/10
your flow was good 6/10

vote: hoops

keep elevatin kids

uppin..

stop sleepin..lets get honest votes in here

uppin this battle.. drop a vote, and leave a link to one of your battles.. we will hit em back up... get at us

uppin this ish...leave links

e: the thing that lost you your battle was.... FORCED MULTIS... im not dissin you or anything, take this from an mc whos verses are multi-oriented.. and flow that doesnt punch doesnt impress me... dont use em if your vocab isnt good enough to pack punches in there.. cos seriously man.. the few punches you did have were pretty weak.. decent self-glory lines but they dont win battles.. some nice wordplay though..

hoops' flow, although a little more basic, allowed him to get hard punches in.. he didnt self-glorify as much... and when he did it was part of a punch. so id say hoops took it....

v/ hoops

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return the favour?? my sig??

i'll take a look at one of those battles in your sig, an drop an honest one.. aight, im uppin for the win, one more vote... aight UP

uppin for the win ya'll.. lets close this battle.. leave links

uppin dis for my boi hoops........................

Nice battle...ups to both of you.

E-Dubz, I was feelin all the multis that you had in there, they really made your flow a lot better. The structure wasnt too bad there was one line in there that was a lil streched. Wasnt really feelin the punches, you had some tight lines, but they didnt seem like they connected with him. You did close the battle pretty tight though, if all the punchlines were like that it woulda been better.

Hoops you had a nice line to open the battle, lol flying with chickens. Your punches were pretty consistent all the way thru, nothing was really spectacular, the one like about him battling his shadow and losing was funny though. You aint really use many multis, he beat you up there. Your flow was pretty straight though, most of your battles are usually easy to read. The closer I wasnt really feelin, maybe I just didnt get it I dunno.

Hoops threw punches consistently throughout his battle, more so than e-dubz did.

v/hoops