after i'm done givin a rap lesson to this cat spanky,
him and his whole crew will be da 1st ones to thank me,
/\ Not feelin this no punch

u must be diagnosed wit the weak rapper disease,
i dont even have to cock a glock to get u on ur knees,
/\ Doesnt link up at all again no punch

down deep inside this kid is a big fan of me,
and he hopes and wishes to one day be able 2 handle me,
/\ a lil punch but self gloryfied again not feelin

if u ever had any skillz in ur style then uve lost it,
im bout 2 murder u boy, and add ur soul 2 my deposit,
/\ I liked this 1 nice punch also good wordplay

when im on da mic, my lyrics come at u like 80lbs of steel,
if u were on a label, id kill the owner jus 4 given a bitch like u a deal,
/\ Flow's off a weak punch at best no real wordplay

rappin aint the career for u if u have plans on making some loot,
i dont see why u wont just give it up like a fuckin prostitute,
/\ Not a hot closer but a lil wordplay used

You need to elevate dawg u only had 1 really good bar in that, the rest was lacking strength in punches and wordplay

Sorry bout the double post, com's goin crazy

This kid doesnt have the lyrical flow but gives lyrical "blows" *
Your like a girl on my dick you wont let go, you just stay down low
/\ Nice punch good wordplay and link up

Its actually ova for you, after this you might wanna join my crew
You'll even vote for me..then I'll just need 4 more so I can finish you
/\ Lol nice

This has ended and this win has been givin to me and not to you
I "walk through barz" just like I walk through you, yea it's true
/\ Not really a punch not feelin that 1

Dont be upset you lost to a veteran and you know who I'm betta-than
After this you'll be cryin cuz you know that you surrender-man
/\ Ok punch nothing special though nice double rhyme

I bet that your actual record is a 0-23 score, do you really want more
Girls dont stick to you like magnets cuz they just dont adore
/\ Nice punch

Cuz 5 "blows you givin" that didnt hit...and now you couldnt quit
Wit a quick win...this whole battle will be apocalyptic
/\ Nice diss and a good way to close this

Spanky 6.5/10
Lyrical Flows 5.5/10

1 sided this was im givin this to Spanky

lyicals ver seemed to hit harder to me, his punches connected more n the wordplay was better + lyrical's flow was more creative n he used a wider range of vocab

spanky seemed to play his flow of of basic words that didnt always = a punchline n his punches didnt hardly connect

v - lyrical

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both wasnt that good, but i gotta go with spanky on wordplay and flow, lyrical u was to basic wit ya words,

i'm goin wit lyrical on this one, i thought your shit just came togetha better than spankys did, and when you say both out loud lyricals comes out soundin better. you had some pretty decent punchlines but they didnt have much competition up against spanky's

spanky came decent but you need to blend your shit togetha a little bit better so it all flows together, and try to come with some harder punchlines and add a couple of multis and metas, it was close, but not that close

Vote=Lyrical