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-   -   Deadly-Rhymez (I.I) Vs. Sire (HWC) (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=133423)

Poppa Kap 07-10-04 02:34 PM

........................Deadly rhymes took this with ease.















;) but seriously.





Quote:
Originally Posted by DeaDly RhymeZ 01
Yo all u do is be whack and to mention he sings
Im a Real LORD u OF THE SIRE but still cant aford the RINGS
Er……er……ok.

This Enemy is just done from the Beginning now the end
Vocabs so small as u probley 30 its the same as when u was ten
Wizack.

Yo This White boy allways uses words like Fin
Fat ass bitch u Probley got Strecth Marks on ya Chin
That was ok but I think I hear a “year mum” joke like that. . .so isn’t original.

You a drug deala not if u was from Chronic u whould choke
Hold the CAIN cause this punch is leavein you wit some COKE
Erm I dunno what u were tryin but u failed.

Man u win this hell naw this battle aint shit
The only battle u win is against a emcee for the first suckin dick
Erm…no go bak 2 front lines.

This verse was shit. Ur flow, spelling, punches & flow were bollocks.


Quote:
Originally Posted by Sire
lol....

when he set his status, kid musta been drunk, see...
I heard of spanking
........but how the hell do you pimp your monkey?
Er….didnt like.

fuckin punk he...... been charged with wackness in text
court's in session
let's skip the trial, & I'll just sentence him to death
nice wordplay…….not particularly hard but I liked it.

Deadly's wack as fuck... not to mention a bitch
he has ill intentions
but he must of gotten better, since the kid's never sick....
was ok.

I could win with 1 punch but I'm still goin, why not...
I'll just keep hittin face
with every drop, until his girl tells me to stop
lol funny
kid left me no choice... nothin to do but stomp him
seriously
it's so eazy.... you'd think he came from Compton
yeh that was pretty tite.

Better originality & wordplay, u didn’t need to come hard & I don’t think you did but you won by far……..































That far…..& some more…….Vote Sire.

Decree Wun 07-11-04 09:35 AM

uppin............................................. .....

Decree Wun 07-12-04 01:59 PM

Uppin This Come On Vote On This Yall!!!!!!!!............

Sire 07-13-04 09:54 PM

uppin this shit.............................

Pop Lotty 07-14-04 12:22 AM

Deadly - not a good verse, the only thing that was decent was ur flow. You had bad punches that were too simple, and then some didnt make sense, like the coke one. You had no personals except for when u tried to use his name, and that was BLAH! as fuck

Sire - Way better verse compared to the other guy, u had better punches, personals, good flow, and a witty verse too, i liked that the "never gotten better" line, the sick lines are played but that had good wordplay with it.

v/sire, for havin a wayy better all around verse.

Durmil 07-14-04 01:40 AM

Punches-Sire
Personals-Sire
Flow-Deadly
Strcuture-tie
Wordplay-Sire
Creativity-Sire
Vote-Sire

plz drop honest vote on this batle thanx peace....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134637

Durmil 07-14-04 01:42 AM

why the fuck cant i poll???!?!?!?!!

Decree Wun 07-17-04 12:47 AM

uppin this.............................................. .

Sire 07-20-04 02:00 PM

votes votes votes votes............................................. ...............

Sire 07-23-04 06:19 PM

uppin this crap............................................

D-ICED 08-03-04 06:33 AM

ok deadly good struture and good puches and vocab and good personals but........sire went off on you with better flow vocab and harder punches
good personals and better dissses all around .
vote/sire

FlowIntelligent. 12-17-04 04:48 PM

sire wins this easily... better punches better wordplay better everythign basically except for structure i think deadly rhymes wins in that category.... decent punches from DR but not good enough to win....

Sire dope verse.... good wordplay and punches you were pretty good in this battle could have been alot doper though elevate

decent battle

vote: sire

Sik Wit It 12-24-04 01:38 PM

v/ Sire

came harder

deadly elevate more :cool:


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