uppin this shit

this was good... i really didnt understand alot of mixtapes verse... and e-dubz just came harder i liked his verse a little more soo im gonna go with e

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Both: In a 2 bar punch battle, you really gotta hit hard and get personal.. and both your verses werent hitting as hard as they should.

Mixtape: I wasnt feelin your wordplay, or flow.. lines were stretched in the first bar.. which def isnt good in a 4 line battle.. but your closer was nice, flowed well, hit pretty hard.

E-dubz: better wordplay and opener, but what brought you down was the lack of a complex rhyme scheme, and that "lyrical stake" stuff is VERY played... like.. every battle i vote for pretty much someones killin someone with a lyrical sumthin.. it just doesnt hit hard enough..

so it comes down to e's opener vs mixtapes closer.... so i reckon mixtape took it..

v/ mixtape

yo. return the favour.. need votes on the battles in my sig

its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
Ummm...I'll give line a 2/5

my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
Nice line....4/5

Total= 6/10
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Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
Couldn't really get the flow on that......1/5

You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
Ummm....2.5/5

Total= [b]3.5/10
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Ok I wasn't feeling Mixtape drop too much for the fact his flow wasn't that good & his punches wasn't that great.E-Dubz had a good flow & nice punches.He was overall better compared to Mixtape.<<>>Vote=E-Dubz

I'll poll when somebody hit my battle up (2nd link)

Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
^^pretty good line..liked uit...8/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
^^Nice closer....nice creativity....8/10

E-Dubs
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
Nice shit i liked this shit....8/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
Urmm..ok..line..seen shit like this before..nice..tho....7.10

Winner..Mixtape ...i think he was mroe creativity...iight...

e dubz:
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
^^that was weak and was hardly a punch at all 4/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
^^good meta's decent punch 6/10

overall : 10/20 (50%)

mixtape:

Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
^^decent punch ok meta 6/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like emistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
^^lol that was kinda weak but funny so decent punch 5/10

overall : 11/20 (55%)

vote: mixtape

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