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uppin 1-1 close battle lets get some more votes on this

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Originally Posted by Lil-trip

aight Structure on Verbals was off n the flo was with BXP..

regardless tho you gotta step out how you read it n how the spitter is comin off n after re-readin verbals jus the way i presume he is spittin makes sense n even tho this isnt real, in reality the way he was spittin if your rooted in your shit you got the message..
abdominal pain im the major like david wayne//
he still a souljah but aint know how to us an ak//
as my mockarie rhymes bust and spray//
its ma killer instinct ur my prey,eat u up like a fiend but thats ok//
thats alright u just scared cuz u thought a ice cream cone was the mic//
deep throatin that shit like it was a mic and ike//

You had it lost in the beginnin in most cats cant come off a bad start but that center kept it real, my vote is to verbal..

Vote: verbal, props to both tho

what the...that shit doesnt matter.. its about who merked who...who had the harder hitting punchlines..who dissed who better....your judging him on verbals.... :banghead:
can we get some votes from someone who knows what hes talkin about....

uppin.............................................

uppin
dont sleep on this will return the favor
just vote and drop links

structure - bxp
flow - verbal
punches - bxp
metaz - bxp
wordplay - bxp

vote - bxp

dont sleep on this links ... vote like u said make it fair n explained

plz leave a explained fair vote on these links

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

that doesnt explain why he won that shit aint fair ima dq that shit it doesnt explain why he won if people gonna vote from now on say why that persaon one but for now that shit wont be dq'd unless he can repost explaining on why u won but if that dont happin its getting dq'd

and we still uppin fo votes on this

uppin....will return the favor...
ask you can see...just drop links......

uppin....will return the favor...
ask you can see...just drop links......
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verbal violence..where were the punches?? didnt see any...any wayz u had a pretty weak verse..seems more like u was just rhyming about urself rather than battling..with like a few references 2ward ur opponent, structure was wack..was all over the place..rhyme scheme was also weak..but u did have some decent vocab..sumtimes

b.x.p..was an ok verse nout special..but at least u threw punches unlike verbal..structure was tight and so was your flow..u had some played concepts..if u use more imagintive concepts this well defiently elevate you!..coz u have everything else down!

v. b.x.p..better all round verse and punches

uppin
dont sleep on this will return the favor
just vote and drop links
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verbal violence
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines....other then that...structure sucked...most of ur lines were mad stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchness...u had a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

B.X.P.
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
both had a few metas...B.X.P. had the better structure...as well as the more stable flow...he also had better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...B.X.P. gets my vote...

VOTE - B.X.P.

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...