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genocide-nice opener really and eye opener u shouldnt of used tha put a fork in em like cuz its really played out ya punches we iight nothin spectacular but all in all an alright verse
ill-There’s no way, shape or form that ya lyrics could harm me// Cuz I’m gonna rip you like clothes from tha Salvation Army//-- tight bar it caught my attention dat punch line hit hard good word play on reppin ya crew too i liked that ya metaphores could use some work though all in all this was a close ass battle yall both is on tha same level naw mean just tempa came harder i thought vote-ill tempa According to post by you in the Rookie thread in LL, you and Ill Tempa are cousins. Family votes do not count. |
im givin it to genecide cuase hge had better punches both had good flow both could use a lil work on vocab but good battle from both
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uppin for votes.......
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shit this nigga thinks he is hot cause he is ill tempered…
after I spit so sick leave this bitches body lyrically dismembered ok..could of been better I knock this nigga down first round and he don’t want no more.. This bitch is done… put a fork in him.. And im only on line four.. lol...decent why they call you ill tempa anyways… cause ur rhymes arent sick you probably caught a std u bound to from riding so much dick.. nice punch..LOOL With all the herbs u have ko’ed that’s practically cheating nigga with that wack verse…my cock is the only mc ur beating* lol...decent Bitch you couldn’t handle me even when I was in Fatal Tactic u always got a hard wood everyone knos that so it aint a classic this was ok nothing special..lol a good drop...you had some nice punches and personals flow was good struc too...just keep elevatin...good verse 7/10 Ill Tempa Yo Genecide, that’s yo name? It sounds like a “STD”// This nigga must be crazy thinking he can “fuck” wit me// first line was wack..2nd was ok There’s no way, shape or form that ya lyrics could harm me// Cuz I’m gonna rip you like clothes from tha Salvation Army// decent You say ya flow is tight and you nice but no one believes ya// And yo “structure” is fucked like tha “Leaning Tower of Pizza”// a fake personal?....aight bar You wanna represent for your people in this battle, tha Fatal Tactics// I’ll outline yo whole crew in chalk and leave Genicide in a bag of plastic// Blah! no punch It’s amazing how I come up with these lyrics, some may say it’s magic// My spits are “Hard”, structure’s sturdy as “Wood”, I’m a true “Class-Sick”// Self Glorification....no punch just talking bout yourself Yo rhyme scheme is distorted beyond belief, ya lines is stretched like elastic// I’m gonna be nice and give something away, here’s a loss, you can have-it// ok..better You know I’m “hot” cuz I live in Florida where it’s always “sunny”// And always handle my beef, cuz I got more “straps” than a “mummy”// again self glorification People laugh at you punches, cause they corny not funny// It’s ILL Tempa I do more damage than a crash test dummy// Blah...1st was aight 2nd self glorification..no punch I think you learned yo lesson, so go back to geekin on yo computer// I got one last question, answer honestly, how’s it feel to be a loser?// ok prob your best bar of your verse your verse was weak...your didnt really throw any punches and most lines your talked about your self..but your struc was aight and flow was good 6.5/10 Vote-Genicide |
Genicide - Good spit, you had good punches and good metas 7/10
Ill Tempa - Just edged it, you had harder punches and more multi's 8/10 Vote - Ill Tempa Please return the favour.... Me vs RV Me vs Poetic Justice Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Personally I like Genicide's flow more than Ill Tempa's. But Ill Tempa came good but reason was cause he had more lines to say more. Genicide coulda said more but it was structured enough in those short amount of lines, pretty good punches. You coulda ended the last line differently tho, make that Hardwood and Classic used in a dfferent way. Ill Tempa's finishing lines was better than Genicide's, but I'm still gunna go for Genicide on this.
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aight, this the scores...
Ill Tempa
Yo Genecide, that’s yo name? It sounds like a “STD”// This nigga must be crazy thinking he can “fuck” wit me// ^not the best opener, but not too bad... 6/10 There’s no way, shape or form that ya lyrics could harm me// Cuz I’m gonna rip you like clothes from tha Salvation Army// ^this was weak in my opinion... 5/10 You say ya flow is tight and you nice but no one believes ya// And yo “structure” is fucked like tha “Leaning Tower of Pizza”// ^nice personal, if it was a true one... 6/10 You wanna represent for your people in this battle, tha Fatal Tactics// I’ll outline yo whole crew in chalk and leave Genicide in a bag of plastic// ^very funny nice one... 9/10 It’s amazing how I come up with these lyrics, some may say it’s magic// My spits are “Hard”, structure’s sturdy as “Wood”, I’m a true “Class-Sick”// ^who cares, this is not flatter myself this week, throw anotha punch.. 0/10 Yo rhyme scheme is distorted beyond belief, ya lines is stretched like elastic// I’m gonna be nice and give something away, here’s a loss, you can have-it// ^kinda funny, not bad.. 7/10 You know I’m “hot” cuz I live in Florida where it’s always “sunny”// And always handle my beef, cuz I got more “straps” than a “mummy”// ^anotha flatter moment, get over yaself.. 0/10 People laugh at you punches, cause they corny not funny// It’s ILL Tempa I do more damage than a crash test dummy// ^not bad again, get off ya own dick... 5/10 I think you learned yo lesson, so go back to geekin on yo computer// I got one last question, answer honestly, how’s it feel to be a loser?// ^kinda funny, but didn't follow up anything.. aight closer 7.5/10 45.5/90 = 50.6% Genecide shit this nigga thinks he is hot cause he is ill tempered… after I spit so sick leave this bitches body lyrically dismembered ^nice opener... 9/10 and funny I knock this nigga down first round and he don’t want no more.. This bitch is done… put a fork in him.. And im only on line four.. ^not bad, put a fork in him took a way from the affect... 6/10 why they call you ill tempa anyways… cause ur rhymes arent sick you probably caught a std u bound to from riding so much dick.. ^lol lol lol too funny, ha ha... 10/10 With all the herbs u have ko’ed that’s practically cheating nigga with that wack verse…my cock is the only mc ur beating* ^lol anotha funny line.. damn nice personal too... 9/10 Bitch you couldn’t handle me even when I was in Fatal Tactic u always got a hard wood everyone knos that so it aint a classic ^nice closer, towards his crew too.. nice job.. 8/10 42/50 = 84% *besides the percent, Genecide won this.. he had more personals and both had good structure... ILL Tempa, u wrote a lot but didn't throw as many punches within ur verses, and given that Genecide used STD when he dropped first and i recognized ILL Tempa used it in his first line... that was wack, but whuteva if ya feed do it correctly... but anyways, my vote: Genecide hands down nice drop y'all holla! get at me fiya gurl ~wun~ |
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