-Strype-
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay is pretty good...most of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

verbal violence
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure is pretty wack...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretched lines...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had metas...-Strype- had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...-Strype- gets my vote...

VOTE - -STRYPE-

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

strype ripped this one,
He almost lost my vote when he said, "make ur shit green"
but made up 4 it with the "fake thug from colorado" line.
verbal made an attempt 2 flip strypes lines around and use them against him but it
didn't work. All i got was frusturated from trying 2 put 2gther what he was saing
"only thing that styped is the road, look 2 the side"? o.k.
ima go wit strype.