aight, i appreciate the constructive criticism, lookin for more votes tho, 2 more and i got this

Straight up hmp had this shit in every category

HMP
structure is good...flow is on target...u had tight metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...at times it seemed as if all u were doin was droppin metas...like ur opener...that shit didnt connect at all...no good personals...quotes r played, and u didnt even use that quote in a way itd connect him...

mistah_tate
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure sucked...it seemed like ur lines were goin everywhere...flow fell off cause of the structure...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
HMP had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more metas...neither had good personals...mistah_tate had better better wordplay and more connecting punches...and despite HMP having taken 3 of the categories, to mistah_tate's 2...mistah_tate gets my vote...and heres y...structure is not very important in battles...and metas just add to the flow...and to me, wordplay and punches r more important categories to have then structure, flow, and metas...so in that sense...mistah_tate gets my vote...close battle though...

VOTE - MISTAH_TATE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

Mistah_tate did not have good stucture, who ever said that..
mistah basically won because he had more content... he had some disses that some would call personals and a few punchlines

HPM, you did have better stucture and flow, but I judge text and not audio, so he won because of what he wrote.. he insulted you in every other line therefore running with the victory because you held back...