ok I'ma give this battle to LL. it was a very close battle down to everything exept puches. LL had maybe 1 or 2 punches that hit harder than drastic's. if it wasnt for the comparisons in the opener. neither openers were that special but ll's won this battle to me

this was a very close battle, both of u hit hard but for me lethal lunatic hit harder with the punchlines

structure - tie
flow - tie
punches - lethal
metaz - tie
personals - tie

v - lethal lunatic

drop a vote on this link....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133957

IIGHT cool it's 4-1
Will return the favor
dont sleep on this

aight yall i posted my vote up, i couldnt vote before cuz i aint have 50 posts, now yall return the favor right here at my own battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...845#post1396845

Lethal took this with better punches, better wordplay, and better struc. I wasn't really feelin ya struc drastic, it kinda halted your flow.

Drastic- You had some decent attempted punches, but most of them were just plain statements. Like the line about cuttin him in front of a mirror, and the 9/11 line, i wasn't really feelin those. As i said your struc was simple, and it took away from your flow. Your punches were kinda played too, like the skywalker line. Not a bad verse tho, just need some work.

Lethal- Nice verse, you had some hard hitting punches, and you had some nice personals about his sig and his name and stuff, which was pretty creative. You don't need that many astericks tho, you shouldn't have to explain every other line in your verse. I thought you had better flow tho, and you had better wordplay than he did, and you also had better punches, so you get my vote.