Datruth29
structure is good...flow is on target...no metas...wordplay is pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

EyeDentdy
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...that newbish...but anywho...structure is good...flow falls off a lil cause u had a few stretched lines...no metas...wordplay is decent...a few of ur punches connected...ok personals...

Overall
EyeDentdy had more personals...neither had metas...both had a good structure...Datruth29 had the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...DaTruth29 gets my vote...

VOTE - DATRUTH29

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Yeah, this one was pretty much one sided....

Datruth came with some OK punches and a few even stuck. None really stood out and a few were pretty played, but I guess it was an OK verse. His flow wasn't bad and he had a little wit behind his punches. Overall, I guess it was a solid verse. You need to elevate a little though. Come up with some original concepts...

Eyedentity was pretty much wack in this one. He had a hard time rhyming and his flow was off in a few places. He didn't really have any wit behind his punches and he pretty much sucked. I think you need to start over and learn how to rhyme and structure your verse....

Vote - Datruth