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uupin...................
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uppin 4 votez
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Lethal was more creative wit his shit.... It had better rhymez, structure, and punches... All around pretty tight nah mean... Str8 Hood was all over tha place wit his structure and flow.... He basically had no punches, but tha lyricz was aight... My vote goes to Lethal... 1.
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Fuck It I Wont Vote Lol Not Enough Posts... Damn, Lol... 1.
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uppin for some votes
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Lethal: your verse had a lot more creativity put into it and had better flow, ya structure was good to, overall had the better verse on the topic too, captured it nicely
str8:your verse was ok too, but didnt have the intensity as lethal, but overall good work from both VOTE:LETHAL Drop an honest vote here:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135415 |
my bad man, ya in my crew.....well uppin for ya......
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not really a lot to say......... hood`s woz straight weak it didnt even rhyme vocab was poor imagery woz worse it jus looked like a ten year old piece sorry no hate but u need to elevate lethal-like u said u prob didnt come that gud... but u did wot was needed n took this in every aspect vote-lyrical return an honest vote plz http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...134#post1420134 |
shit aint got enough posts.my bad
i meant lethal not lyrical lol |
uppin 4 votez
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uppin 4 votez
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Structure Wit To Lethal
And His Fit Da Story More But You Was Hot To Hood Return Da Favor Good Stuff |
god damn all these newb don't have enough post to vote.
I’m start doing topical battles. Heres my verse on life as a gun i'm being held tightly in the hands of a kid// i got 16 in the clip and one in the hole so i'm fully loaded// and i ain't had the feeling of being bust yet// i can tell that this kid is nervious cause i can feel his sweet// we hiding in the bushes and I’m tried of waitin// I just want one of my bullet to break in, some skin// i'm ready to blast, at any cat that walks past// all of a sudden i'm moving and going fast, look behide the cops is on our ass// i got dropped and with the pain of hitting the gound// i let one go out the camber and everyone went down// but one did't come back up, and i don't mean to brag// but no i have to live my life in an air tight evidence bag// anywhere down to the voting. flow: both style: str8 understanding of topic: lethal feel: lethal who got deeper into it: lethal ayo str8 it was a good flow and style andnice name but you started rapping about d12 and biggie and jay and pun and pac idk but it seem like that ain't gotta do with a guns life lethal i didn't like the tyle that center shit. other than that good. i liked the vision i got with your words. vote lethal and i can really vote lol |
Hmmm...well...both of you stayed in the boundaries of the topic...nothin' really creative...so no points on originality or creativity here.
So basically...you both did the same thing...so I will vote on that. My vote goes towards Lethal. Why? His piece was written better than Hood. As you can see...Lethal had a much more complicated rhyme structure...hood was basically jus' rhymin' at the end of every line..n' sumtymes didn't even rhyme at all... "Hopin I aint gotta put bodies to rest man im prayin to god But when a nigga act up I have him layin in chalk" Lethal's was just written better...it's a no brainer to be honest... v/ - Lethal Return the favour both of you please and vote on the battles in my signature. Thanks. |
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