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Uppin some more....lets get some votes in here....

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Alright.....lets get some more votes up in here.......

eB: You need to come with the instinct that your going to battle. You were spittin, but you just werent hittin anything. You really didnt even have any punches, i mean sayin the AC needs turned on is just a self praising line...which dont work as a punch. You gotta try to do something to put the other people down. Try some wordplay to catch peoples attention, then come back with a hard punch in the same bar. Flow was also a lil off, you had some short lines and some long lines it just wasnt workin.

.gunit: Pretty nice verse, some wordplay to set up your punches, good structure overall and pretty nice flow. Wasnt too hard for you to take this battle. I take it this was your first battle on here? Not too bad.

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P.S: You forgot to poll on one of my votes..lol

this is gona have to go to gunit101, strongr all round, flow structur multies, and punches, the oter guys jus wack