umm okay battle...

opener-gota..it was a personal
structure-umm a tie
punchlines-la la
multi's-la la
creativity-a tie
personals-gota
finisher-gota
enjoyed-gota...i think if battlin wasn't personal then la la would of won dis battle...nahmean gota some of ya shit was weak but ya personals was good so there 4
my vote-gotta

^^^well it's kinda hard to use personals when you don't know anything about tha person...2-1 my lead but tha peeps that voted for me didn't do tha poll...uppin this for more votes

Aight Check It...

You Who Voted For La La....Wow....Please Excuse Me But That Verse Was Wack. Not One Punch, Self-Glorification and Thug Talk Threw Out The Spit LMAO...

GotAssWhoopinForU Actually Threw Sum Nice Punches At This Herb Who Thought He Was Nice...La La Had Nice Flow With Sum Multis But Thats ABout It. GAW4U Mos Def Took This With Punches and Metaphors.

Vote - GotAssWhoopin4U

~R~

La La - Hot drop. Had plenty of multiples and some nice punches this was a real good verse. Nice structure. Everything was on point. 8.5/10

Gotta - You had a hot drop too. But la la had more efficient multi's than you did and came harder lyrically. But overall ya did ya thing. You had all on point but just not as on point as la. 8/10.

Vote - La La
Return tha favor on tha real.
Me vs. Unfortunate

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133785

^ hit that shit up since im votin on this


lala ya opener tried to doin somethin tight but didnt go no where wasnt worded right an didnt land to good ya closer was wack lol@ ya fuckin bars dog i wasnt fealin none of it that talk abotu ya girl shit is wack mulites aint givin u no advantage just helps ya flow an thats it u lacked punchs and had no personals pretty weak verse to me

gotta ya opener was decent soft punch an personal didnt hit to hard ya closer lmaoooo i thought of the same shit when i looked at his name nice personal an punch the rest of ya verse was decent some punchs wherent to good but u came with a bunch of personals even thought not all of em hit hard u had some

vote gotta

had a better verse to me an actually had personals in it gottas closer was prolly the best lines out this battle la la u need to work on rewordin ya punchs kid

la la's drop:

wow that was just.............................................. ..
a flat-out self-glorification drop seriously were you in a stage of
your life that your brain told you that being full of yourself wins a
battle fo ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well I say flow was nice anywayz you had multis I have to say
that in what i'm typing of course.....your originality/creativity
was not all original I have to type aswell.....punches weren't
that good but it was decent in my opinion........................
personals weren't there at all thats not a good sign.............

Shabba Ranks a.k.a. Gottaasswhoopin4u drop:

ok that was overall a pretty good verse I was really feeling
it most of the time it fell off sometimes tho but hey every drop does!
ok hmmm.........flow was nice which means the syllable count
was on point aswell.........multis was aight nothing special also....
originality/creativity was pretty good in my eyes............................
punches was aight I was feeling the majority of them all...........
personals well you had them opener was a personal also
and that and the fact you keep self-glorification lines to a
mininum & none.......

my vote goes to: Shabba Ranks....

uppin 4 vote.........................................

GOTTA ASS - nice verse wid nice structure. it was the better of the 2 and it was more creative n had better punches

LA LA - lost for the weakness of his punches, although u included multiz n som gud wordplay gotta ass whoopin won this clearly

v - gotta ass whoopin 4 ya

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