RapVerse.com Community - MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS truth a.k.a

truth a.k.a...

Battling me is a 'DUMB MOVE' like 'playing leap frog with a UNICORN'/
Left u scorned...talk shit? I'll have your 'lips' TORN worse then porn with new-BORNS/
->>fuckin disgusting but i laughed

after this RAPPING-FIGHT I'm stealing the "first amendment", so I know I'm walking away with the "BRAGGING-RIGHTS"/
Cause Marv’s like "porno vets" in "virgin roles", he's only "ACTING-TIGHT"/
->>first line too stretched shoulda left out the first multi and reworded

Not a single soul will come to your "wake" after I SHRED-YOUR-ORGANS, cause "kids
sleep on you" like you rest on a single bed with SEVEN-"ORPHANS"/
->>weak personal

There's no chance of my "ankles and LEGS-DEVORCING", cause "de feetin' me" is like getting a blow job from the HEADLESS-HORSEMEN/
Truth’s the rawest alive, with chords in his wrist and two mics in the PLACE-OF-FISTS, my existence alone will replace the faith of an ATHEIST/
->>these were stretched but they were good and being good is better than having good bar length

God's a SATANIST, after this AMAZING-DISS you'll need an AIDS-ASSIST just to TAKE-A-PISS/
"Kurt Cobain" takes me in "vain" cause even God CALLS-ME-DOPE, write the RAWEST-JOKES that put kids in such an AWE-OF-QUOTES that when they come to their JAWS-ARE-BROKE/
->>i dont think god's a satanist and wtf is an aids assist...only part of this i liked was the cobain thing

If you wanna BRAWL-WITH-FLOWS you'll get hit from "all directions" when ATTACKING-ME, cause Emceez who "front" get "left" "right" in "BACK"-OF-ME/
You're WACK-TO-ME, you see T's challenges? Smart foes REFUSE-THOSE, cause now R.B knows that battling me is a "grave error" like "mis-spelling TOMB-STONES"/
->>the directions thing was crazy creative...tombstones thing was decent

MARVOLoUsJ1009

rb could tell dis prick is chicken,look at dem corny's bar's dis kidd is spittin-
cant keystyle everything he put up is like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"-
->>doesnt flow at all but good punch

dogg pleez quit it u only spit on da net u was neva ryhmin on a track-
nigga da iron gon clap,and leave dis nigga "truth" dead "lien" on his back-(lyin)
->>ok

shit u had da take all nite writin me a verse i already proven u shook up-
ur garbage dogg only time dis dude "strong on bar's" is "doin a pull up"-
->>ok meta

when i spit dogg they all watchin and stair,so u aint gota shot at dis here-
u new 2 site and already ya "times up" just like u threw ya "watch in da air"-
->>watch thing is played to death

he talk about puttin a album 2gether pleez nobody a be coppin dis quer's-
when u get a sign ya deal a be worth whut a nigga get 4 mopin in "sears"-
->>weak personal

u da worst rapper on rb i been on here 4 a few month's but u not lastin 2-
only way u could say u "2 sick" is if ya "moms" had "aids" & ya pops had it 2-
->>wack

u real soft aint no part of u street,if i load up dem clipps and target u creep-
u'll have da get a vest & "guard ya grill" like da hood had "bar be que thief"-
->>this was alright...couldve flowed better

dogg if i suck the y dude u look up 2 on here sayin marv dat dude's heat-
no audio's cuzz ya "flat lines" suck plus u aint got da "heart" 4 new "beats"-
->>terrible terrible flow in first line...second was good

truth took it. his shit was stretched but it was more creative. marv i saw you had a lot of good ideas there but the flow was unrappable at points i had to read it like a book or some shit. no hate to either just my take on it.

v/truth a.k.a...

\/hit me up honestly\/