shup u herb..im not gotta sit here i argue with a weak ass mcee..just shup and up

sporadic took this to doubt, i didnt get energys guys verse,

giv my vote to sporadic on structure flow and punches

drop a vote here

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134656

sporadic you knob jocky can't you see that you went over the line limit and read your 10 lines out loud and compare it wid mine, I beat your sorry ass enough so that just explains something your shit. Upping this thread.

Fuck up u herb..i didnt go over the line limit over ppl have explained this to u..shall i use smaller words like in ur verse to explain it again..if u feel so strongly about this report this to the admin..

upping this thread................................

Sorry if this is a free post but Energy man ur weak i gotta admit

jus face it man he gettin more votes then u so shut up
he better den u n stop sayin ur da best cuz u aint biatch

Can an Admin please tell this fucking Moron that Spor spit 10 lines...

i would have to give this one to sporadic because more of his stuff was on point but the ENERGY guy is wack.......... he still usin kid vocabulary............

upping dis theard..want to get this over and done with will return the favour if the votes are well explained

ok upping dis theard...over a week old now come on i will return the favour if they are decent

sproradic came harder in every category with mad wordplay and personals.his structure wasnt the best but it was original(i think).
Energy,on the other hand,had a complete alphabet soup verse.very herbish.you need to work on your wordplay and structure.dont put the /'s at the end of your lines,makes you look ''newbish''.all I can say is elevate and you'll get there.

sporadic

Calling yourself energy got me laughing but yet slightly intrigued,
Thinking my flaws will rejuvenate u like glucose
...coz your battle imaginations fatigued
->>it was ok...rhymin about glucose...you white? just a guess

Occupation is better than yours isit? Listing kellis song as your expertise
but yet your 16 and no qualifications
..waiting for the results of your G.C.S.E's
->>wack to death

Fed up of herbs asking me to spit first illiterate got me in frustration
u like fucking girls? chea i was doing that
...when you just discovered masturbation!
->>filler

Does mommy know about this site, you have permission and consent?
if she knew she block it protecting
…u from the offensive lyrical content! (laughs)
->>doesnt rhyme unless you say CON-sent...but nobody says that

Could find any flaws could ya? As my lyrical talent increases
Got u looking for scrapes from my shredder
…coz ive left you in pieces
->>decent closer


ENERGY

your pretty funny makin rhymes about gcse's/
when ur dum and an't even learned about your abc's/
->>what are you 8

sporadic cut the three syllables leaves ya wid dick/
you can't rap sick, your shit and ur da one who's thick/
->>shit

I guess you thought of ya lines from eminem, don't attempt/
if you tried you only get your fucking ugly bitch slapped/
->>weak

this guys mental, because of his little small needle/
not even medical people could suss if it was REAL..../
->>makes no sense at all

your punches give me a alergy, and you an't no gee/
i'll slice your spleen and internally bleed and after leave/
->>WACK

sporaidc you came weak as hell and you still merked energy......terrible

v/sporadic

Pretty easy voting here, energys whole thing was wack and i was very impressed with Sporadic's verse.

Sporadic: All yours was better, and your punches worked well.Your verse flowed well too.
ENERGY: Pretty wack, try making your lines a bit longer, could have used better things, not abc's etc.
Opener - Spor
Closer- Spor
Punches - spor
Wordplay - spor
Flow - Spor
Sturcture - Enegry
Multis - none

Winner - sporadic

Sporadic didnt go over the limit, just a different style and not one i really like.

energy - decent, but ur punches werent witty.. flow was ok... no wordplay...
no disses that were good, only personal was the name play u had, overall u need to elevate, shit was weak.

spo - good verse, mostly all ur bars connected.. some were witty.. some werent,
punches were good. perosnals were ok... overall u did what u had to to win, and it was easy :thumbup: ... flow was decent to, structure... ended up being better than i thought it would. good verse.

vote - spo, better punches.

hit this up please.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136173