-Virt.
with words that slay,you could only 'marvol-us' if 'spider man' was my name//
and after this battle my crew would have given you '2 losses', so i'll call you 'cool j'//
coo flow, the wordplay in the first line is forced, second lines wordplays coo, aight punch
-Marvolousj1009.
virt is a week strange guy,u nice? nah i think some of ya teamates high-
he luv his "crew" & like dem "tattoo's on allen's body" he neva gon leave "a.i"-
i like your flow, aight wordplay, the execution/wording of the line was bad though mayne
Overall, I think Virt got this. He had the harder and wittier punch, aswell better wordplay. Marv, work on your wittiness a lil mayne. You got a coo flow going. I liked how you went with a personal approach, keep at it. Virt, work on setting up your line a lil better mayne. It helps add wit, and makes your line harder if ya do that. You both don't need to point out your wordplay. This is a league. If people don't know what your wordplay is, they shouldn't be here. Aight battle.
Vote - Virt.
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