yo decent battle, both of you had some decent punches. favorite line for premanition.neva dropped a punch with conviction...just a multi addiction...
‘’Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch’’
……just an example of state’s punching restrictions….

State capitol- good opener, punches were decent nothng special. your personals were kind of generic not hard hitting, and your text hurt my eyes. just kidding./

i give this to premanition for better punches, close battle though.

2-1 to me, votes appreciated.......................

Flow-Premanition
Punches-State Capitol
multies-State Capitol
opener-State Capitol
closer-Premanition
humor-State Capitol {THAT A.I LINE}
enjoyed-both

vote- State Capitol

Prem ripped on his age pretty well but u shud of expanded some more.....one punch & two max is the most u shudda dun here where u did like three...luckily for u they were good & witty

According to occupations…u been redundant for seven days….(profile)
Leader to ‘gods?’…well then heavens plagued by eleven gays…(crews lineup)
Personals here thats good & altho a basic diss it was witty

Laugh at claims ur records legit….with no structural wit…
And that illustrates that a straight jacket is ur daily outfit…
Complex, original & witty

This bitch upset cos he facing vets that put his record in debt…(above^)
Not confident…you’d put money on me but ur not old enough to bet…
Again another personal

They were your best lines. You had some good personals, flow was a bit iffy at times but generally a solid verse that had wit originality & was direct to him.

State......

I Own This kid Like the two letters in his sig, He's Now under New Management..
outwitted by a kid still In Junior High, Your reputation, Just Damaged-it..
That was pretty kool...u kinda flipped a hard punch that he used at u at flipped it back at him in a good way. The first line was pretty tite.

When Prem spits, no fire is dropped like the U.s-N-iraq peace treaty..
you 18, still no girlfriend, Fantasizes about sexual intercourses, with his 1st grade teacher..
Still Can't "spit" Holy, Hense the fact he gave head to his Preacher..
These lines are played seriously. ALL fire lines are gay & played & that holy line was played & wasnt even good, why do battle rappers wanna spit holy?...u tried at wordplay here but it failed coz its played

It seems u were trying to write to complex here but go for PURE WITTY AHRD PUNCHES Drop the multi style. This didnt have any good personals against him & some shit I cud really rip into & critique u on but I wont.

Me & Prem are both AI but I vote fairly & my vote is worthy.

Vote=Prem.

truth.......thaz an honest vote.........upppin.........

prem..came off tight as hell,rippin,,vocab and wordplay were very nice,structure cool easy to follow verse punches were hittin
good spit boi

state..same thang son...rippin,wordplay and vocab was good,structure made it easy too rerad,punches was smokin..but your personals gave you the edge

vote state

Not a bad battle, but I thought Premanition came with some stronger personals in this battle, and that gave him the win. Nice try from State Capitol.

Vote: Premanition

It was an ok battle but I have to give it to perm

Sturucture: Tie
Flow: tie
Punches: perm
Personals: tie
enjoyed: tie
Openor: Perm
Closer: tied
Vote: permanatioin

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