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uppin fo some honest ones y'all, dont sleep on this shit

mc riot, liked ya opener, 2nd bar was ok, 3rd bar was an alrite personal.. 4th bar was a pretty decent personal, but empty and missing dont rhyme, so it sort of killed it a bit. 5th bar coulda been better on the second line but i got what u were sayin easy.. and the closer was alrite too.

VA, opener was a bit hard to make any sence of.. 2nd bar was ok, but had a pretty weak punchline.. same with the 3rd one, it wasnt much of a punchline, 4th line was better, it had a punchline.. 5th was... ok i spose... nuthin special. the 6th wasnt amazing either.. the closer seemed to be working on technical rhymes more then a good diss.. sometimes trying hard to get a good multi in can really take away from the diss.. the killed with font line was ok.. but i dont get pill is shot..

overall.. Mc Riot took the battle.. with punches mainly..

I LIKE BOTH METAPHORES BUT I GIVE IT 2
MC RIOT HE GOT ME WIT DAT JIM CAREY LINE
DAT WAS HOT

PLEASE VOTE

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uppin for more votes in this bitch

Quote:

Originally Posted by mC RIOT

I'ma spit this shit raw, u guaranteed to fuckin remember me/
If ya don't, I'ma RUN your brain around da block to JOG your fuckin memory/
Add a loss to your record book, make your status kinda uneven/
U a GULLIBLE BITCH so is it aight if i start callin u "Miss Believin"?/
Your initials read "VA", but u aint from Virginia or D.C./
When u rhyme shit about me, u like Green Bay cuz u are cheesy/
U lack lyrical content, like your avatar and profile, your style's empty/
When we listen to u rap, we searchin for skills but da shit is missing/
I'ma burn your style up, yo I'll FRY it like an order from McDonald's/
I'm fresh and clean, your shit is shitty and dirty like a hick's tonsels/
I'll be Michael Johnson plus a fuckin cheatah in this lyrical triathlon/
Your shit is just "Alrighty then" like Jim Carrey wit a MASK on/

...word...

hit dis up wit some votes bitches

its a shame u BIT that line from eminem.

cd - infinite... track - 313 ... em clearly says this line.

^ it didnt bold the line i wanted it to so ....

Im'a run ya brain around the block to jog ya fuckin memory
is the line.

MC Riot definitely comin with harder punches, both about equal on wordplay, but Riot got in more personals than VA. my vote: mC Riot