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definition of tru pain, I spit butane//
the only thing u d-tain is hard dick from UK// Na..not feeling dis shit..no punch..no flow..2/10 see how we play, left in rooms made fo emergencies// and when I talk about pounds, I don't mean english currency// Meh..weak..wasnt effective at all 2/10 u got words fo me, cut ya tongue, speak broken english// slurr ya language like Mike Tyson, Imma make u famous// (shakes head) do i have to continue breaking down ur shit..played 2/10 too dangerous, flip continuosly like acrobatic gymnastics// then u panic cause of habit, like a flabbergastic faggat// The set was ok..but the punch was weak again..3/10 I cause havoc, back out before it's to late// alter ya state, kinad like ya brain when u gettin baked// lol basic as fuck..weak 2/10 Riiggghtt where to start..the only thing decent again is the flow..everything else was very weak..punches were weak and sumtimes played..bit more creativity in those would be an improvement..vocab was ok..structure was all over the place..keep battling!! peep vets drops and u will learn summit... elevate like a boxer with no arms, your punches will be abcent... dont even have to try, i can take this win by accedent... Weak..spelling mistakes put me off to..2/10 u spit 10 lines wit no punches, u must be fooling about... coz the rules didnt say no punches, y u rulin them out?... Tha was ok!!...the best bar ive seen so far 4.5/10 you thought you was hot, till it came to spittin, u froze... u in 5 battles, and and gona keep ripped like tramps clothes... No punch..played concept really to..more creativity!!! maybe i should let u correct your shit, give u a 10 line extention.. if you was a fukin milloinaire, you still wouldnt PAY attention... Attempt on wordplay..which didnt cum off 4 ya really..not good 3/10 Much the same really as your opponent i think one bar got this one though..which is the one i scored 4.5..but u still need to elevate..flow was aight so was the structure keep at it though bro..we all learners!! v/ d tain- better punches..just!!! Y'all return a vote on one of my battles since i did give u a breakdown and explainations.. |
i'll give it to d-train, he came harder with punches they hit harder, some of his lines were dope.
willnova, yo shit was tight, i just wasnt feeling it, some shit was HARD, but in the end tain came harder |
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