Uppin Again For Votes!!!!!!

UPPIn FOR VOTES DROP A LINK ILL RETURN THA FAVOR!!!!!!

uppin agen plz drop sum votes ill hit up you battles also...........

uppin for votes hit this battle up plz

uppin to close this battle

up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up uppin

uppin..........

tourn
ya fake bitch...there must be a glitch in ya ass cause imma tax it
i'm overduein wackness..just to let everyone know i'm feelin Drastic
^nah...not hard-hittin...no real punchline...

your raps' shit...but this is legit when i'm tearin "Folks Up"
cuz the only "Slobz Down" is this fucks sloppy sketches he drew up
^nope....

As i threw up i spit out dudes' rhymes in a ziplock ...
but your shits so old..it made ya freshest seem like classic rock
^bleh...atleast its a punchline

i'm here to block ya advancement as if i coldhearted teacher
cuz ya held back like little boys after a service w/ a preacher
^not hard-hittin...

Drastic's a leacher and i'm not feedin this weary fool
then again the back of cerial is the best of his material
^nah...

Drastic
'll "shread" you to pieces concider yaself "tourn"//
A loss fa you is my thesis youll need ya record reborn//
^2nd line was lacking..atleast the first one was a personal...

Sworn into secrecy cuz ya decentcy's nowhere near hot//
He's stupid thinkin-he's a real mc when money for his rhymes tha only thang hes got//
^meh...atleast der better than the first guys

In this battle you're a dirty cause nothin but flaws//
Youre an "attach on" (d/r) like "shit stains" in "dirty draws"//
^coo....its pickin up

"PAUSE" so we can take a quick "moment of silence"//
Cuz ya flows is off track go ask ya "counsoler" for "guidence"//
^nice...we're gettin sumwhere...

Violence....................is all i bring up to tha plate//
Ya punches are played so "when in" this battle "winnin" became my fate//
^filler...

Face to face ya bitch out as ya mumble and stutter with falter//
Watch yo rhymes get dismembered as thier "presence" gets "altered"//
^coo...


Overall: Drastic takes it hands down.

Return the favour and drop honest votes on my battle plz. thx.
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