uppin for votes............................................. ...........

Dare had better punches but his lines were ssssssttttrrrrrrrreeeeeeeetttttcccccccchhhh
, long, and which really broke up the flow. Mishap, you lacked punches but you had flow and a niced bar structure which made it easy to read. But seing as how this is a battle I got to give it to Dareturn cause he had better punches but really that's all he had on you, you took the battle in everyother way. You started off with a couple of good ideas but then didn't really seem to finsih them like your opener.


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Damn, this is a close battle, you two should battle again and see what happens.

da Return Ripped This Hands Down.....

quick B/d

Open-Da Return
Close-Da Return
Flow-Da Return
Vocab-da Return
Winner-Da Return

Bestline-this could be ur last heart beat, since its definetly not you last defeat
ur rhymz are fake to say the least, and mishap you think your a beast

Beat His Whole Verse

Winner-Da Return

Flow:Mishap, his syllable count was better so he took this category.
Punches:Dareturn...U had more hittin punches than the other, i didnt really like the other kids verse
Personals:nun, unless u countin Dareturns opener, but im not sure if that was true
Multis:Dareturn had some
overall: Dareturn had the better verse, he had better punches, and multis...the only thing mishap had was flow, no good punches so ill give it to dareturn.
v/dareturn