^please meta i had u blaklisted before from all the hate u and physik give me plus legacy was 3 days late and 25 lines short obviously u need to pay attention to more than who u dont like

uppin this shit i won i won i won i won haha jp vote bitches vote

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metaphysic had got meta scriptz on his dick obviously look at his name..and the fact that he got put into the dreamteam..

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Don- ya topical verse was pretty good...but some lines seemed to not connect that much i mean i dont know how to explain it but yeah...your flow was decent i thought...you had some pretty good vocab ...and you stayed on topic...so overall you did good...
Legacy-ya topical verse was pretty i thought i was feelin it more...your lines were good too...and also you had some nice vocab.....and had a nice flow too...and also you stayed on topic so overall you get my vote for for better verse and i was just feelin it more ya know....

v/Legacy.....

iight legacy..
u had good flow..nice complexity and good structure

Don..
nice flow..and good structure but u didnt come hard enuff to win tha battle

so legacy took this battle with better flow structure an complexity
nice battle so its close

v/legacy

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This was dope from both of you--- i thought they were both well thought out verses, you both followed topic in your own strange ways which i liked from both-- Only I like Legacies verse more at the end- he used some really good imagery and the ending was a little less cliche, and it was also kind of touching in a way- I thought Don you were good but when it ended it was kind of abrupt, and with all the references to prayer I thought the ending would have tied into that, just what I thought tho no hate... Vote Legacy.... Return the fav and get this isht closed--- http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

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don...i was really feeling your verse at first but your flow fell off and so did your structure some lines were long some were short...and you fell off topic a couple times and added lines that didnt need to be there...your vocab was bad it was too basic...you had some good wordplay and a couple good multies but other than that i think you did a poor job at writing this topical

legacy: your verse wasnt much better than don's but your vocablary won this battle for you...everything else between your verses was pretty much even but the vocabulary defined the winner...decent imagery decent flow structure looked stretched/forced you could have came hotter and put more effort into this but i still think you won

vote: legacy

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Return the favor Bitchez........... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

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