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Alright...Jdots punches just werent landing. I wasnt really feelin em cuz it took me a while ta understand em. And your lines werent rhymin sometimes too. That opener was kinda tite tho. MFP had some nice lines and harder punches. That noobie slash line was kinda tite. But yea this battle was kinda weak and these punches were kinda boring. But MFP gets it...
Vote-MFP Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 |
Both Had Punches Dat Hit Hard
But Jdot Had More But Towards Da End He Kinda Lost Me But It Was Good So My Vote Is 4 Jdot |
MY FAULT I 4GOT TO ASK U GUYS 2
VOTE ON MY BATTLES AMAYZE VS FORGOTTEN FLOW' http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 AMAYZE VS 2HARD2LOSE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 AMAYZE VS KOOL COL-B http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136465 THANX |
yo thanx for the input
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Im not always like this, im a nice guy at first
But if ya mouth open up to fast, U gonna get more "slashes" than a "Newbie verse!" - { that line fucking rocked this whole battle} MFP cooked and served His opponent Here..... J DOT had some decent shit but not enough for the WIN, NO BEEF GUYS OR HATE VOTE MFP |
Return Tha Favor! Me vs. Thugzy J Dot - One thing i liked bout ya rhymes was the gangsta mentality. Ya shit had that edge but some of ya shit didn't even rhyme. LOL. Good structure, easy to read. Ya closer was whack. Good luck and keep elevatin. 5/10 M.F.P. - Your rhymes need some elevatin too but all of yo shit rhymed. You had a punch or so in there. And a few multi's. Structure could of been better. Overall not a bad verse. 6.5/10 Vote: M.F.P. |
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