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-   -   DiM vs L.I. (Site Battle Intro) (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135275)

MetaPhysik 07-15-04 11:02 PM

Dim you bitch alot, i'll battle you, if I win you shut up and go to uf.com, and if you win, i'll give you the password to enter Dreamcast forum.

L.I. 07-15-04 11:13 PM

uppin for a killer KO on the UF fag....:)

...Voke... 07-15-04 11:18 PM

lool i cant vote but like i told dim...uf is a disgrace in text that was not even 1/2 of L.Is best and he still merked you....and stop talkin shit on uf you forget im over there

Know-Gimix 07-15-04 11:35 PM

IIght heres some honesty----

Dim- Your verse had the structure of a cat who does audio- Your fault- It aint aint a text verse, your punches were basic - the art of war line was iight- it had some word play- I'd say you'd be classified vet on some sites but not this one-- my text kills this shit. the elevate off uppercuts was o.k but nothin special as far as text goes- you gotta improve ya structure and make it easy for someone to read cuz you right people are retarted but we live in a real world you gotta convince us not the other way around.

L.I- Your verse was pretty decent- you came harder with your punches and wordplay- every line was quick and to the point with a decent punch or a setup- this was a text verse with none of the crazy boldness and squigly lines and shit for punch designation so it was easier on the eyes and easier to flow with.... Vote L.I


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