DAM NEWBS...IF you dont know what your talkin about DONT VOTE!!!

anyway...darklight nice flow..structre was on point...ive seen you come better...
punches hit ok..you had some personals that hit pretty hard..wordplay was good..
keep it up...

rapmistress...structure was crap..flow was off...

Line 1 XXXXXXXX
Line 2 XXXXXXXX

thats how the sentences should be..it makes the dlow on point and easier to read
wordplay was ok..punches were weak...elavate

v/darklight
better verse overall..

DAM NEWBS!!!!

aiight uppin this some more so this shit can be closed once and for all.

DarkLight

Shit, no femcee on this site sucks quite like RapMisstress
Leave her lyrically undressed, her rhyme spirit in distress
->>weak rhyme but ok

I whored her to the max, now she calls herself my bitch
Fuck, she ain't much of a sight to see, but good for a lick
->>haha

She prefers other hoes, at least she does somethin' right
Or maybe that's her flat ass in the av, even smaller in light
->>filler

I dropped a half-ass verse here to match the figure of yours
I leave ur body used and stretched, u'll catch rain in ur pores
->>pretty cool

I'ma finish this bitch, Mortal Kombat ain't got nothin' on this
Wanted to be whored on RB? Here bitch, u got ur wish.
->>good closer

RapMistress

Yo You's a bold muthafucka cuz you chose ta battle/
I see in ya profile that u play the piano/
->>weak opener

You ain't Alicia Keys you would neva be/
Even if ya voice was as deep as her's you'd still be weak/
->>liked the concept couldve been done better

But you only fourteen you ain't even seen puberty/
Nigga i'll sit you on my knee and breast feed you like a NEWBIE/
->>wack

You ain't on my level so ya bets ta commit suicide/
A bitch like me turn into Dr. Jekly and Ms. Hyde/
->>ok kinda played

In other words you couldn't even see how i was comin/
A bitch attack like the muthafuckin 50ft woman/
->>ok punch

So as I end this rememba one thing/
The only way you see light is if I let you keep livin'
->>rhyme? weak closer


my vote goes to darklight for overall better verse...mistress your structure was fucked and i think a lot of your punches hit weak.

hit this up honest http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135830