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OMG...Ill Tempa maaaaaan...I'm likin the punches and the rhyme scheme ta go with it. Almost rhymin perfectly with the rhymes in the middle of the lines too. I'm likin it. T had a good verse but Ill just had lines in there that stunned me. Good closure ILL. You Kill'd em in the punches, metas, and structure. Ill tempa gets mah vote.
Vote-Ill Tempa Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136 |
okay battle....
Punches-Tempa by a bit Personals-Thug...saw a couple name plays but they werent that gr8 Multi's-Tempa Wordplay-Tempa Creativity-Tempa...close but some of Thug's were childish Opener-tempa Closer-Thug...i thought tempa's was whack Overall-Ill Tempa....a more solid verse plz vote on this battle of mine thats been slept on and needs to get sum'd up.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133764 |
wtf cant i poll?
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damn,i aint never complain,but GEE,u sound like u dickridin,dint even leave no feed back on me,good or bad,pure dick ride,but i think ill,uve won this battle,but uve put it on only so many posts can vote,shunt av done tht................oh well...uppin!!!!!!
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uppin for a nigge.. drop a vote guys
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god damn u people up to much
vote ill tempa verse was much better in all categorys specially punchs them killed off thugzys punchs byfar structure was again ill tempa ay thugzy drop the // shit an get some creativitie an wordplay to help ya punchs stand out an make people wanna read ya verses dog ill tempa the double rhymes was coo butnot neccesary goood verse though |
Thug... Need better rhymes and structure dawg... Not like ur punches were hitten though... Basically... Elevate... Ill... Pretty nice... Good rhymes, punches, structure, and flow... V/Ill
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damn ILL tempa that was hott!!nice wordplay,punches and flow.I was feeling your verse.
THUGZY,your verse was ok but it wasnt at the level of ILL.It was kind of ABC most of the time.most of your lines were played out-lioke your trash bin line.just try to find new wordplay and youll be better.your structure needs improving. ILL,work on some better wordplay too but it was real good as it is. v/ILL Tempa |
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