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I go with Trajedee because it wasn't as boring.. you guys should of set up a line limit.. but tradejee's verse was more on point and i could read his.. so my vote goes to tradejee..
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i have to say trajed'ee takes this one for flow.....ya verse just sounded better reading it and you had some good words/punches in there too...overall good verse
village:ya verse was too long man, and ya structure was kinda off, which messed up ya flow, but some decent punches as well.....keep at it VOTE:TRAJED'EE |
oh yeah return the favor please, these battles be slept on:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135415
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I still don't know why you people don't get the fucking shit.. RAP BATTLES... his was like... fuckin' shit he should save for like a song or some shit... whatever happened to Punches and personals and shit? Plus... What the fuck ever happened to explaining your god damn votes. Uppin'... maybe someone will actually relize that this is a battle... not a song competition or shit... and Trajed'ee... next time put down the rules and line limit 1st so people know when it's supposed to be 20-25 lines instead of 10-15... |
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vote village pimp, cuz shit made more sense
trajedee... i unno u gotta throw some punches man, u had decent flow... some multies and shit, no real disses tho, or witty punchlines... use some wordplay to... and fix ur structure... otherwise, u need to elevate. VP - flow was bad, strcuture was too stretched.. punches were weak.. u focused on rhyming to much and got away from punches... but u had some decent creativitiy and some ok disses.... average tho.. vote - vp vote here fellas. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136173 |
Trajed'ee
Im catchin foul energy wit wild tendencies// ice grill style, never smile, and smash enemies// ->>ok opener Im a SOULdier dressed in fatigue, reppin a commissioned league, but not in tha sand wit thugz// Im on concrete pavement where they wave shit, and keep hands on a snub// ->>first line way stretched Go head kill tha noize before I have to spill ya boi// ->>played true, no my chips aint blue// ->>what?? Im profound, a vet pitchin heat like tha Mets, after tha crown// ->>weak feel me, on tha real B, I got tha skillz see// ->>filler Word up, get served up// ->>filler Im raw, a rebel wit a cause, now pause....// ->>filler Im spittin tha undaground sound, profound, I leave mics shut down// ->>filler and make tha speakers short circuit, Im gon speak it and work it// If I can reach it Im gon jerk it// ->>filler beat ya til ya purple, around ya head, birds be doin circles// ->>i like the idea but couldve been done better you knocked tha fuck out, took for ransom wit a sock in ya mouth// ->>decent fuck opposition, listen, its time to end it// cause whatever u got Im bound to win it// ->>weak punch if u got beef put it in tha street, and send it// ->>weak Im gon beat ya ass and leave you smashed, flinchin'// you got milimeter heaters, testin a Smith N Wesson, big inchin'// Hail to tha glorious lyrical wizard... spittin wisdom to twist em til they wither// ->>ok closer villagepimp Where you reppin’, What’s ya stompin’ grounds, Are you ready for KC’s Finest/ I got a new weapon, Wanna hear how the tounge glock sounds, Nope. Bow down to your highness/ ->>second line is stretched I can foresee a tragedy, One that’s about to happen, Cuz My lines popped, knock you out into a coma/ Whores see the trajed’ee, ya scream afta my gun done clappin’, left him dropped out like havin’ no diploma/ ->>ok punch See, Hellrazor brought meh back, & I Got ta Smack These cats who think they too hot fah rap/ And I’m about ta Sack, your record and ‘bout ta black your eyes until they dim out ta black/ ->>i was feelin it Your record is winless, And I think it’s time I bend this backwards, God as my witness/ I’ll knock you senseless, I’ll send ya back wurr ya came from, And I’m the unrelentless/ ->>it was ok I’ve done been patient, and I came home, And your fucked if ya say shit… your who? Trajed’ee?/ You mad at me, Have a seat, You like that faggit sheet, Yeah… So Have A Sweet…/ ->>wasnt feelin this at all A Sweet trip to hell, After I fire a few warning shots in ya head, Now ya carried by the bitch six/ & 12 can’t send me to jail, I’ll drop your body over their dead, Told y’all not to mess with hicks/ ->>didnt connect Man you can’t get pussy, You beat meat son, You got that bitch on ya avi just to masturbate/ You can only try to touch me, Uh, Beat me son, Shit, Battle Me, You need to get it on straight/ ->>i liked this The Midwest’s King, You challenging me is the bitchest thing, So here it is… MOTHA FUCK YOU/ You know I got Paseo, We knockin’ out hos like you like a KO, And 6 feet under is where we tuck you/ ->>cool 10 wins don’t nearly show my habits, I win all the time, Jumpin’ newbs like u like a fuckin’ rabbit/ Went back to the village cuz I too good for city status, Freestyle all the time, Fuck you fuckin’ faggit/ ->>i liked it If you want to stay loss less in the matter of a day, Then you shouldn’t have tossed this battle shit away/ Fuckin’ with Village just isn’t smart okay, Cuz if You piss me off you’ll meet all of PSA/ ->>didnt like this closer trajdee you came real weak in here you were tryin a new style and it didnt work out for you. villagepimp you got a crazy stretched style but at least its consistant. I didnt like some of it but you def took the battle. Wasnt an all out merking but you took it by quite a bit v/ villagepimp \/hit this up honest\/ |
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imma haf'to give it up to traj...although it sounded like u changed yo flow around bout 4 times in yo flow, like u put hella shit together, it was still hot...you opened well, and closed well...i like it
vill.yo shit was coo, no hate...long as fuk, but u did yo thang, but couldnt hold on... ya'll's metas and punches were str8, but traj. took em both, no need to say rhymin, they both rhymed well in ya'll own style v/traj. (it sounds like u a fast rapper?) drop 1 more HONEST vote on this, so it can be closed...thanx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136294 |
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