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Mad Dog: 6/10
Your Structure Seems Off To Me..Not Really A Nice Flow but You Had Sum Nice Personals Laced Within Your Punhces. You Had 2 Fillers But The Other Punches Were Nice.. Overall Nice Drop.

Lethal Lunatic:4/10
If You Woulda Added More Personals With Creativity You Woulda Took This. Your Structure and Flow Was Decent. Just Add More Creativity and Personals With Your Punches.

Vote - Mad Dog

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uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

mad dog- your strcutre was a little off this time.......didnt rfeally feel that you was commin as hard as you could come......your punches was okay felt that you could have come harder and that you really didnt try this time but your punches was deffintly harder hittin then lunatic's

lethal- your strtudture was better then mads but i think that that was really all that you had going for you.....your need to work on your punches a little bit more and try and reword them or something so they hit harder

v/mad dog