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up #4

up #5

Revoke had better stucture and his disses were on point.. Eragance, you need to stop rhyming like that. I don't like that rhyme scheme, also your content isn't exactly littered with disses.. Revoke got this from personals and treated this more like a battle.

V/revoke

return the favor in my battle, will you?

up #6

ok umm uppin..

yall are sleeping

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Vote..damn uppin this shit

uppin damn..

can someone vote on this shit...damn

Lmao...damn drop some votes....

beware a harsh voter is in your midst...

Erangance's Drop:

dont be suprised when you read and yo eyes start to smoke
cause tha shit i spit is equivalent to a 1000 volts
self-glorification lines and that is pure whackness
not a very good thing at all to do seriously....0/10
no comparin yo flow to mine i deserve a 1000 votes
revoke no need to be provoked you a joke
blah.....1st line self-glorification and 2nd
was the joke :laugh: 0/10
i had to spit first cause u would of probably choked
ya flow sound regurgatated mine the most anticipated
*newsflash* choked & anticipated do not
rhyme at all 2/10
deservin a standin ovation be patient u will soon be congradulatin
young e on a victory easy tookin u rap like u shookin
never face to face lookin u ll be cookin
weak not feelin' 0/10
u weak dont speak keep ya words in ya mouth
i dont feel ya shit like a kick from a mouse
what the fuck????????0/10


OVERALL: 0/10


Revoke's Drop:

your not on my level kid, your skills are going down a Bottomless pit
your a waksta so you can just quit with that thug shit
should of switched the lines around so
the set-up could of been better 6.5/10
its funny you think your ill you just caught the common cold
only way your catching attention is by puttin your verse in bold
haha I like it atleast but the 1st line is kinda
played a bit 6/10
im not even on my 6th line and you know your done
add a loss to your record, its common where your from
its ok not that good not special 5/10
your not worth writing a verse with any sick punches
name you Fragrance cuz your known to spray wackness in bunches
hhahhahaha funny 7/10
this battle is done must of swallowed your verse cuz you choked
and i left you without a chance and being the one who got revoked
okay 5/10

OVERALL: 6/10

VOTE: REVOKE

dont be suprised when you read and yo eyes start to smoke
cause tha shit i spit is equivalent to a 1000 volts
decent
no comparin yo flow to mine i deserve a 1000 votes
revoke no need to be provoked you a joke
i had to spit first cause u would of probably choked
no

ya flow sound regurgatated mine the most anticipated
deservin a standin ovation be patient u will soon be congradulatin
nah

young e on a victory easy tookin u rap like u shookin
never face to face lookin u ll be cookin
nah
u weak dont speak keep ya words in ya mouth
i dont feel ya shit like a kick from a mouse
WACK


Revoke

your not on my level kid, your skills are going down a Bottomless pit
your a waksta so you can just quit with that thug shit
good

its funny you think your ill you just caught the common cold
only way your catching attention is by puttin your verse in bold
haha good

im not even on my 6th line and you know your done
add a loss to your record, its common where your from
ok

your not worth writing a verse with any sick punches
name you Fragrance cuz your known to spray wackness in bunches
ok

this battle is done must of swallowed your verse cuz you choked
and i left you without a chance and being the one who got revoked
decent

Overall Revoke came harder and gets this one

v/revoke

Revoke-
your not on my level kid, your skills are going down a Bottomless pit
your a waksta so you can just quit with that thug shit
7/10 ok punch
its funny you think your ill you just caught the common cold
only way your catching attention is by puttin your verse in bold
5/10 played punch
im not even on my 6th line and you know your done
add a loss to your record, its common where your from
4/10 weak filler
your not worth writing a verse with any sick punches
name you Fragrance cuz your known to spray wackness in bunches
7/10 decent punch
this battle is done must of swallowed your verse cuz you choked
and i left you without a chance and being the one who got revoked
7/10 ok punch
30/50


Eragance-
dont be suprised when you read and yo eyes start to smoke
cause tha shit i spit is equivalent to a 1000 volts
2/10 Weak...self glorification
no comparin yo flow to mine i deserve a 1000 votes
revoke no need to be provoked you a joke
3/10 You at least attempted a punch
i had to spit first cause u would of probably choked
ya flow sound regurgatated mine the most anticipated
4/10 A punch mixed with more self glorification
deservin a standin ovation be patient u will soon be congradulatin
young e on a victory easy tookin u rap like u shookin
2/10 More self glorification
never face to face lookin u ll be cookin
u weak dont speak keep ya words in ya mouth
i dont feel ya shit like a kick from a mouse
4/10 Your third Attempted punch...weak

Vote-Revoke AKA Superior for coming much harder with punches n personals

Err and i forgot to add that Eragance went over the line limit..w/e he got merked anyway, nice drop Revoke/Superior