Kid u jumped into this site like Wayne Brady lookin for talent,
lost twice, named after a white guy is why ur punches are off balance,
^^ the first line was preety decent set up line,
2ed line just aint hit that hard thou u should of focus more on being more creative with ya hit...

u say u sac towns finest like mother goose u spekin fables
an embarrasment the kings wouldn't even sign u to a record label
^^ this was preety weak i thought and aint hit hard at all, u'r set up line was weak as-well i thought u should of tryed harder...

vote: Mephisto

P.S copy and paste one of the links in my sig and return the favor of a vote plez thanks...... or even look for any of my battles plez thanks alot...

Shellz got it cuz his punch hit harder as far as the personal in it that was good too.. both could've came harder but that goes with out sayin for all rappers at one time or anotha mephisto seems like you was ready for a full battle and had to key a punch out...caught off gaurd maybe...but your personal attempt was aight sorta seemed like you was strechin to make it though...
Stay up both
vote shellz

g shellz cuz he rap like a true g and harder punchs

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mephisto got this one cuz his was a harder punchline and thats all there is to it.shellz urs was alright wulda been better if the sac town part was true and if the kings didnt play ball. v/mephisto
need some HONEST votes in the sig...

1 bar
so i liked shellz bar better, wasnt good but better than that wayne brady
i would suggest 4 punchline battles at least3 bars so voters can get an idea of ya punchline capability
cuz no1 should lose a battle 4 1 line
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