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Deliquint 07-21-04 03:23 PM

uppin more votes

holla back errbody and thanks for the otha votes

Deliquint 07-21-04 10:18 PM

yo uppin more votes
yall help us out and we''l help yall out

Deliquint 07-22-04 02:25 AM

Upping More
Votes
For This Motherfucker
We Will Return Favors

Deliquint 07-22-04 01:29 PM

Upping For Some Votes Yall
Come Bring Yall Votes And Favors Will Be Returned

KroNuz 07-22-04 01:35 PM

Optimal Takes It For A Few Reasons... One Deliquint Just Have Vocab Barely Any Punches And He Tryed To Highlight His Shit With - - -...

Punches: Weak But Optimal
Flow: Niether
Vocab: Deliquint
Wordplay: Weak On Both Sides Niether
Multis: Niether, - - - Dont Make It A Multi
Originality: Niether

Final Vote: Optimal

FLooZe 07-22-04 01:59 PM

Deliquint
structure wasnt that great but you had hella wordplays and shit.your optical illusuin line,your hood and jacket,lol,good lines.your flow was kinda off at some points but it was some good spit.liked it a lot.

Optimal
Your verse was kinda,well wack.First off,you said you had to unload your clips.....not a diss.head over hills,backflips....um no.then you said they were gay,when he didnt say a word aboput men.but i liked the line about him having to explain what his lines are about so that makes em wack.the rest of your verse wack wacko.need to elevate in the wordplay area.

v/Deliquint

Deliquint 07-26-04 04:06 AM

yo we uppin on this battle
so give us this last votchall

Deliquint 07-30-04 03:22 AM

uppin for more votes on this shit
holla at us
come on

Mr.Wattz 08-04-04 04:25 PM

Optimal took this wit ease he had some nice punches and put up s
ome nice vocab wit it so he gets my vote......Deliquint had
really no personals and some of his shit was played but he's still decent..

Vote:optimal

Kayem 08-06-04 10:27 AM

I think diliquint got this one.......both rappers had good sturcture and both flowed easy.....

Also nice vocab from both but i think delquint was a lil bit beter than optimals also deliquint had tha really good multies in here.

I thought both had somenice punches....Overall it was quite good from both but diliquint got it with tha multies....

I liked these lines...

~dont Contemplate this Roughly, your Brain Thinks Scruffly~
~must~be retarted, cause Im Bout to Hit you Wit a Biscuit like KFC out Of Kentucky~
lol nice

~Reppin oakland.. u comin up a bit short like the raiders~
~Cause u have no vocab its equivalent to third graders~

Vote: deliquint


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