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help me close this battle n i'll return the favor with honest votes holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136610 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 |
uppin for votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Ill return the favor for nebody who votes
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String takes this with better punches and some good wordplay.Willnova,you did pretty good its just it feels all your verses are the same.good ideas tho.
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uppin for votes holla at me yall n i'll return the favor
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uppin for votes uppin for votes lets get this battle closed ^^^^
holla at me vote on this battle as well http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648 |
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willnova cuz his rhymed and was a liitle harder coo battle
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Aight.. This battle was pretty much one-sided. String came alot harder and his punchlines hit hard.. WillNova didn't really have any punchlines and his ryhmes were pretty simple... But String gets this one...
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why cant people vote on this battle nemore? somebody told me they tried to vote n they couldnt |
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uppin for votes holla at me yall n i'll return the favor
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WillNova
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is ok...flow fell off a little bit...u had a few multis...wordplay wasnt good...none of ur punches connected...no good personals.. String9487 structure is alright...flow fell off a lil...u had a few multis...wordplay was wack...a few of ur punches connected....no good personals... Overall both had an ok structure...both had a decent flow...both had a few multis...neither had good wordplay...neither had good personals...string had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...string gets my vote... VOTE - STRING9487 |
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