uppin, i need 2 more votes and im out, leave links

uppin for votes and links.

uppin, wanna get this closed. leave links.

both were good but i think this battle goes to
Battle:Verbal abuse
structure:Verbal Abuse
opener/closer:goes to Verbal Abuse

Needin One More Vote To CLose This, ANybody??

~D~

Put The Noose Around Ya Torso, Toast You Like A Cersont
Being In The Rap Game, Your Never Fervent, So Wack You Should Use a Curved-Font
Okay opener

I Serve-On Any Atmosphere, You Can Tell My Words Taunt
Talking Like You From The Hood But Whiter Than Snow In Vermont*
Nice bar

In Captivity, Creativity Like An Animal-is-Seen
Rules Being-No Biting, But You Feed More Than Canibal-Pheenes
Okay bar

Beat-Me? Theres No Promise, And Jus To Be Honest
The Voctory For Me is Plain Ans Simple Like The Amish
Poor bar no hate

You Cant Touch Me Like The Bubble Boy, Im a Different Species
You Couldnt Spit Hot Shit If You Microwaved Ya Regurgitated Feces
Didn't feel the close, and didnt understand.. think you played
the barz at the end. The start was cool but you kinda lost it
at the end~


~VA~
[b]Ill retire my text, when DELI Quits producin a Sub. (deli-n-quit)
Cause if hed pay attention to my order, i asked for no BEEF with my grub.
~Lol nice punch and opener~

A crews Useless thug, i want a bowl of cheddar and a bag of green.
rag are jeans? id be upset with life too If I left to Jock a MAgazine.
~Again nice bar heavy punch~
Its Nice to mention, your a delinquint to the system.
If You have any Such Goals, I think Youve missed em.
~Nice punch~


If Not....List em, id be glad to work up a job application for you.
cause I-net battling wont educate, yet make society ingore you.
~lol nice punch~

he scores few(record 3-0), im 200 posts and 10 votes ahead.
just a fact, too make it simple...scope this page, all jokes are RED
~LOL Nice~


you want to keep em entertained? well these folks are fed...your spit is dry.
lips are fried, even hittin 55 in a MAZDA ....you couldnt STICK to DRIVE.
~Lol Nice~

if you cant master the basics, why come in over your head.
its 12:00 and since your underage(level 1)...ILL help put you to bed.
~Again nice punch~

well....nuff sed, looks like your outta LUCK, heres a dark gray CLOVER.
Like Larry Bird's retire speech, I rename you "celtics"...cuz just like Larry's written text, this GAMES OVER.[b]
~Nice close~

Nice opener middle and close, everything flowed and the
punchs hit hard.

I think VA won this battle, his droped a heavy verse. D droped
nice but like VA said your over you head.