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ibraheem you came jabbin right away, you were in control of the whole fight,
some verses didnt hit but for being new to rb , im gonna hane to welcome you, the metaphore had jokes which wasnt personal enuff to pierce, i believe alonger version of metaphores rap could of don it but my vote goes to my mann ibraheem hey just help me to desclosr votes on my battle between marvoulousj and me new rapper vs vet k inda like you well chek in im out 1 |
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Ibraheem takes this one easy. He had harder punches and a better structure. I was gettin lost in metas flow. Ibraheem had a punch in every line. Some of Metas rhymes were all self glorifying. Ibraheem takes this with punches and a good structure.
Vote-Ibraheem Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136785 |
like justify said this battle sucked but ibraheem had somewhat bad structure your meta's were not there but ya punches got the job done.chop down your structure some it kind of looks stretched out . you didnt have any personals you need 2 work on that and word play
6/10 Metaphor your strucs were fucked up 2 but you had some alright punches you can do better than that tho, and you had some personals my vote- Ibraheem jus cuz ya punches were a lil higher both of ya need 2 elevate cuz that shit was horrible |
safe for the vote always welcoming feed back helps me elevate
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need one more vote leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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need one more vote leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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need one more vote leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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need some votes leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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I say ibraheem simply cuz his was tighter than metaphor's although a couple of his rhymes were predictable like Meta said.
come see mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137399 |
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