aight everyone just click on tha low fi version and tha shit works aight one

seriously friggin gimme feedback on this shit im gettin pissed

i heard that shit and the beat is good but you just didn't do nothin' wit it. It sounded like you was just readin' not rappin'. Be more enthusiastic when you rappin'. But i wouldn't play that in the hood honestly. But if you added doubles and other shit then you'll probably would get played n tha hood. Maybe.... other words it was aight

yeah, u got potential, but u got sum thangs u gotta werk on, just cunstructive critisism. werd

yea i think this song is straight.......nice flow on the beat good job man

thanx guyz.... would ppl vote ma song as hot or flop"?