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J: ya lines were stretched but you had betta vocab so fix ya structure..
T: betta structure nice verse overall...

This was close but even though J's structure was kinda off, J had sum punches and was just swingin' like a mug... I didn't catch metaphors from either.. This was REALLY close but the opener of one person's caught my eyes..

my vote/ J Trooper..

not bad y'all keep workin' at this.. and check the link in my sig... LK diss aight,
~WUN~

Times structure and flow were a lot better than J's and J's lines were way over stretched. Times punches came harder and were far more personal than J's. J's verse did lack personals so some lines could of been pre-written.

Overall: Timeless for a generally better verse with better punches

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Pretty clear who won..

Time- good strong verse, had hard hittin
punches, a nice rhyme scheme...
i see you used some personals which
hit hard and you worded them all very
well...flow was on point throughout
aswell and structure was good

J - verse wasnt bad, some good wordplay
used in the verse, but the punches just lacked
they werent really hard hitting likes times were
flow was ok, some lines were strecthed


vote time

1#uppin........................................... .

I kill kids like you for a living, i slightly gone mad r-kelly
Let's face it... MY on-net career's lookin up...
....and yours is lookin up to me

Decent Punch..good to open up the verse 6/10

I smash you like mirrors with J's face cast
your like a window in my rectum...
coz you a Payne(pain) in my ass

Wordplay was nice..pity some ov the herbs on dis site dont understand it..punch was ok 7/10

But I'm dropping you boy, like childs game of hot potato
Cuz the dopest thing you ever formed...
...came outta a can of Play-Doh.

mmm..wasnt feeling this so much..still ok though 6/10

your not religious? but you should now pray to jehova
coz this panzie didnt have a chance tho...
...like sunday mornings with the mower!!!

Decent Worplay again..punch connected well 7/10

Didnt wanna check for 12 lines? even more lines for his diss
J your like armless kids at birthdays...
...you will never carry a gift!!

Lol..decent punch..still could ov been put across better 6/10

Another mcee flattened as i quickly fly-by
this battle is like rugby matchs won by kicks...
...because i didnt even try!!!

Ok wordplay..not as dope as the others though

was a pretty decent verse..worplay was decent.so was a flow and structure..a few punches could ov connected better sumtimes though

IP: D135 D6AF


They all ready pre-warned you that im deadly like one of a Twisted Televangalist
Ya Heart.. is gettin Dissolved from Bars.. that resemble... ones from a Mechanic

Flow was well of here..spoilt the punch big time 4/10

Call me Arragent but my Perception is that neva have i witnessed any Competition
Deadly Lyrical Ambushes touched Front lines.. Newbie of the year.. my Nomination

Not really attacking time less..almost taking the piss outta ur self 4/10

Look Timeless my rhyme is "This" that your Bitchless Murder Graphical Scriptures
Vividly Paint my Pictures.10-0 "no mo"mr Time u will never Experience the Gifted

Wtf..really tempted to stop even reading this..weak punch 3/10

Please ya Verses you spittin to me come back.... with more holes than Swisscheese
Witness how carefully "Silence Timeless" not Tanya Hardin but i will take off ya Knees

flow off a bit again...ok punch though nout special..5/10

Logically u will "C'. thats its Impossible for Me 2 lose Squables especially since im Tellin
Pussy Aroma from every bar Time has sent me ive been through more bars than a Felon

naaa..not really attacking again no good 3/10

Neva get the Second Chance to Take the Upper Hand from the rhymes im Deliverin
Strictly Pride Tested Notice the Signature Basically like a seizure i will leave u Shiverin

nope..not really a punch at all again..weak..u need to attack timeless..i dont see that at all

u went wrong in many ways..flow was off quite a bit..punches werent even attacking time..u seemed to be using the online dictionary too much..key to a battle is the throw punches and personals not rhyme about urself..did any who voted 4 j actually understand times word play..guess not..herbs!

v.timeless

uppin

Timeless- you verse was nice....i enjoyed it n shit....but yo punches didnt seem to hit hard enough .....ya gotta work on yo punches....you had a good structure....and you had a decent flow...but not tha greastest....but you had no personals but you need some personals yo...umm but i didnt like the R.Kelly line ...that shit is just played out yo...but overall you did well.....
J Trooper- your verse was nice also ....but yo punches i thought were better then his...and they hit much harder too....you had a good flow i thought....you didnt really have much personals...but your structure sucked ......but overall you get my vote for better punches cuz they were better than Timeless's and they hit much harder...

v/J Trooper....

I kill kids like you for a living, i slightly gone mad r-kelly
Let's face it... MY on-net career's lookin up...
2/10

....and yours is lookin up to me
I smash you like mirrors with J's face cast
3/10

coz you a Payne(pain) in my ass
But I'm dropping you boy, like childs game of hot potato
5/10

Cuz the dopest thing you ever formed...
...came outta a can of Play-Doh.
4/10

your not religious? but you should now pray to jehova
coz this panzie didnt have a chance tho...
7/10

Didnt wanna check for 12 lines? even more lines for his diss
J your like armless kids at birthdays...
...you will never carry a gift!!
Another mcee flattened as i quickly fly-by
this battle is like rugby matchs won by kicks...
...because i didnt even try!!!
these are all 3/10
|----------------------------|
|..because i didnt even try!!! |
|----------------------------|
oh ok i just thought u sucked :D
overall 3/10

J_trooper:
They all ready pre-warned you that im deadly like one of a Twisted Televangalist
Ya Heart.. is gettin Dissolved from Bars.. that resemble... ones from a Mechanic
8/10

Call me Arragent but my Perception is that neva have i witnessed any Competition
Deadly Lyrical Ambushes touched Front lines.. Newbie of the year.. my Nomination
9/10

Look Timeless my rhyme is "This" that your Bitchless Murder Graphical Scriptures
Vividly Paint my Pictures.10-0 "no mo"mr Time u will never Experience the Gifted
6/10

Please ya Verses you spittin to me come back.... with more holes than Swisscheese
Witness how carefully "Silence Timeless" not Tanya Hardin but i will take off ya Knees
8/10

Logically u will "C'. thats its Impossible for Me 2 lose Squables especially since im Tellin
Pussy Aroma from every bar Time has sent me ive been through more bars than a Felon
10/10

Neva get the Second Chance to Take the Upper Hand from the rhymes im Deliverin
Strictly Pride Tested Notice the Signature Basically like a seizure i will leave u Shiverin
7/10

overall: 9/10

Vote: J_trooper

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uppin

fuck this i already beat this herb....i cant belive ppl are actually voting for him...his verse sucked NO WERDPLAY...NO PUNCHES TO ME...NO PERSONALS...AND HIS STRUCTURE WAS SHIT!! fuck this!!!!!

hmm this was a close battle it was got to both of yall

J- ur verse was ok ur lines were a lil stretched and ya punches were aiight and wordplay was good
T- i liked ur verse the most because of the wordplay and the punches came harder the troopers's

good battle to both of yall but Timeless got this

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return the favour like u sed J and time can ya return it? me vs str8 hood

wow where to begin timeless you were complety outmatched you need some serious elevation
I kill kids like you for a living, i slightly gone mad r-kelly
Let's face it... MY on-net career's lookin up...
....and yours is lookin up to me
what kind of opener is that?? he made no sense

your not religious? but you should now pray to jehova
coz this panzie didnt have a chance tho...
who is jehova ?? you strecthed this out to make it rhyme thats pathetic

Another mcee flattened as i quickly fly-by
this battle is like rugby matchs won by kicks...
...because i didnt even try!!!

yeah that last line sums it up you didnt try this was fucking pathetic

timeless 1/10 only cause you took time to type

They all ready pre-warned you that im deadly like one of a Twisted Televangalist
Ya Heart.. is gettin Dissolved from Bars.. that resemble... ones from a Mechanic
not bad could use work but much better than your opponets

Look Timeless my rhyme is "This" that your Bitchless Murder Graphical Scriptures
Vividly Paint my Pictures.10-0 "no mo"mr Time u will never Experience the Gifted
thats a hot line nice shit

Neva get the Second Chance to Take the Upper Hand from the rhymes im Deliverin
Strictly Pride Tested Notice the Signature Basically like a seizure i will leave u Shiver
nice closer could have been better but better than your opponets once again

j_trooper 6/10

timeless you could have done better j_trooper just outmatched you this time

vote j_trooper

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