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Saytin 07-28-04 02:29 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137463

^vote honestly..and yeah this should be a DQ

Jacket 07-28-04 09:27 PM

yo dawg, sorry bout the lateness for real...ive been outa town...i'll leave it up to you whether you still want me to drop...if u do, thats cool, if not, i understand

Desipher 07-28-04 09:32 PM

vote on da prodigy vs saytin an i'll return the favor

Justify 07-29-04 03:35 AM

yah, i dont like winnin by DQ, i win fair n square, drop jacket, and dont freepost in this thread again prodigy

Jacket 07-29-04 02:29 PM

ok Justify, heres your competition to get yourself a fair and sqaure battle
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried.

Katastrofe 07-29-04 03:07 PM

YEaH
 
DQ it...thats a no show... have u pm'd him?!

Katastrofe 07-29-04 03:11 PM

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm....^^ you loose.
Jacket..had some multis and punches but they were weaker than shit.
Justify...basically should get the battle anyway... Jacket drops after the time frame and shit like dat. U had better punches, multis [few], and structure, Jackets shit was easier to read upside down.
My vote Just.

Jacket 07-29-04 05:24 PM

remember....Justify "no showed" on me first******

Justify 07-29-04 08:44 PM

Jacket does not get a DQ, I told him for giving me an extension he was allowed to drop whenever he could, no harm, no foul...he dropped, so vote honestly, thanks

Kizza 07-30-04 01:39 AM

Am I better than Jacket? That's a rhetorical question
Everyone knows he's the Al Gore of this battle election
good. nice punch.
Shoulda known better, dont challenge a "lyrical master"
Ya drops causin more confusion than a "natural disaster"
better punch. good keepin the flow.
Go on, get out ya book "Rappin for dummies"
cuz you couldnt drop it hot if you paid the devil money
yes, great punch.
Bet ya nervous now i can tell ya bodies twitchin
You on the L-train now, no reason for ya bitchin
a bit down. but still a decent punch.
You couldn't throw a hard punch if you brought brass knucks
I'd be dodgin ya shit left and right, duck, and uppercut
last line could have been harder. decent closer.....but a good opener and good flow.





ok Justify, heres your competition to get yourself a fair and sqaure battle
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
stretched way long dog.
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
again stretched, soft punches.
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
better punch. good line length
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
nice multis, decent punches.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried.
stretched......played finisher.
decent flow but mostly decent - played punches.

Vote: Justify.

Vote:

Magic5 07-30-04 01:44 AM

Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Jacket
not a very good structure...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had some multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

Overall
Jacket had more multis...neither had good personals...Justify had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote...

VOTE - JUSTIFY

~Luciano~ 07-30-04 02:23 AM


Am I better than Jacket? That's a rhetorical question
Everyone knows he's the Al Gore of this battle election
8/10
Shoulda known better, dont challenge a "lyrical master"
Ya drops causin more confusion than a "natural disaster"
8/10
Go on, get out ya book "Rappin for dummies"
cuz you couldnt drop it hot if you paid the devil money
7/10
Bet ya nervous now i can tell ya bodies twitchin
You on the L-train now, no reason for ya bitchin
6/10
You couldn't throw a hard punch if you brought brass knucks
I'd be dodgin ya shit left and right, duck, and uppercut
7/10


ok Justify, heres your competition to get yourself a fair and sqaure battle
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
5/10
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
6/10
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
6/10
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
8/10
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried.
6/10

this battle came down 2 punches and wordplay and Justify had the overall better verse here

Justify 07-30-04 02:30 AM

Only one more vote....come on people, uppin.......

A.M.O.K 07-30-04 03:04 AM

Jacket
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
Wtf?Sucking up to him?
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
Blah, non flowable
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
No, that is just wack
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
Blah, coppied/Justify do not rhyme
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried
No... that was wack aswell

No meta's, wordplay or personals;& putting his name in your verse does not count as a personal.Obviously your a newbie, get better at text will ya.

Justify
Am I better than Jacket? That's a rhetorical question
Everyone knows he's the Al Gore of this battle election
Old dated & played
Shoulda known better, dont challenge a "lyrical master"
Ya drops causin more confusion than a "natural disaster"
Hows a natural disaster confusing?You see a cyclone & you RUN!
Go on, get out ya book "Rappin for dummies"
cuz you couldnt drop it hot if you paid the devil money
Blah
Bet ya nervous now i can tell ya bodies twitchin
You on the L-train now, no reason for ya bitchin
Filler
You couldn't throw a hard punch if you brought brass knucks
I'd be dodgin ya shit left and right, duck, and uppercut
Yeah ok... Just

Some played lines & some lines that were straight filler, flow was the only winner of this verse

V/Justify;Wasn't great, but far better then Jacket


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