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dawg weak ending and weak personals and punches plus your flow was stretched to far your struture was horrible
ghost good struture and vocab your ending was stronger as was your beggining not your best verse but still a strong couple bars iliked the you speeding to ya death bar and the reverse phsycology bar those was slick you need to use more personals but you aint need um to win this
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vote on my battles honest votes are returned niggas that dr get banned along with haters and those who cant take critisizm

uppin 4 votes...

Ghost better harder punches Avanish your verse was good too but not as hard hittin punches. return da fav. honestly http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

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vote chumpz

ghost is gonna get this one from me because he had a lot of harder punches than the second, more creativity. I nearly didnt get some of the lines, the second and third. you lost me for a second. and this hurts a verse.

ghost get this for better structure and puches.

ok congrats on the vote....uppin...

ghost-ok drop. ok punches, ok wordplay, ok structure just basically everything was ok, u had some parts where it was a lil better but it was mostly just another average verse...6/10
dawgfatha- ok drop.ur punches and wordplay were ok but that structure was horrible. try somethin diferent. some of ur lines werent hot at all tho so i give it...4/10

both elevate
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