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up this shit mayne! fuck yall, this shit been up since yesterday, and still no votes.
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[size=1]bwahaha @ this.
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lol^^^^niggaz iz sleepin wit da votes..i cant vote..
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they say you get what you look up to...for you it's the heaven... .................i aint even good at dice and craps, but i'm rollin on 7 Not really a thrown punch at ur opponent...wasnt feeling the concept either..weak 3/10 you from the u.p. kid, don't ever try to fuck with the dirty Italy... ................and when he says "you can't see me"...take it literally Ok..i didnt like that at all..again weak..wasnt feeling that 3/10 i'll even give you two the same words, you still couldn't rhyme it... ................cause your lines are left-out, sort of like this alignment Actually i was feeling the punch a bit..was creative set up was kinda weak though..ok 5.5/10 you far from the hood, more like the trunk, strapped and seated... .................cause your pun died along time ago...right after he did i was feeling the concept also again..punch could ov been thrown better..ok again 5.5.10 yeah, everyone thinkin gio the big underdog at this wack fight?!... ........but cause of me, this thread have more feedback than ya mic again this was ok..best punchline of the whole verse aswell..ok personal 6/10 This was an ok verse nothing really outstanding but ok..punches got better as the verse went on..seen some good potential in some bars..flow and structure were aight.. since when did noobs know who got skillz nobody PAY attentin too you, you just like BILLZ Wack..course ppl pay attention to bills..other wise we all be homeless 1/10 he said in bitch slapped dat i talk, 2 much shit if skillz was money homie, then you sure u aint rich Basic as fuck..up the creativty..2/10 u act like u the noob superhero, savin noobs from me noobman is what they'd call ya, but u still just a noob 2 me How many times u gonna use the word noob..weak 2/10 20-minus 20 equals you, dats an equation (20-20=0) watch dis nigga feed of my verse like birds re-gurgitatin wheres the rhyme scheme gone mmm...2/10 giovoni from italy and still aint got no spice in his verse if i have 2 i'd battle him twice 2 make him work LAUGHS wtf was that..seriously need to elevate any ways..elevation is needed ..there was no witty/creative punches or personls in thsi verse..flow went off at the end.. v/ Giovanni..y'all drop a vote on my battle..link under my sig..no hate pz |
no bitch, fuck ya what ya thinkin. tell everyone they lines wack? nah b, get the fuck outta here.
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up...again.
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Giovani- Flow Was Good, Structure Was Good, And Punches Were Good, I Liked That Pun Died Line... Nice Flip...
708- Structure Was Ok, But If It Wasnt Centered It Would Be Off, And Make It Look Wrong And Prolly Throw People Off, Plus Bolding Words That Rhyme Are Stupid lol.... Punches Werent Really Hittin Hard To Me.... Punches- Gio Flow- Tie Wordplay- Gio Metaz- Niether Multis- Niether Originality- Gio Structure- Gio Final Vote- Giovanni Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
obviously sparadic aint no hood nigga and thats why he aint get 708 bar.in the hood niggas throw bills out and dont pay shit till we forced maybe in suburbia you pay madd attention to bills in the hood landlords be there on the first and 3rd so no niggas aint homeless.damn you wanstas is stupid.gio good verse i liked both yall shits but 708 in my crew so i cant vote.good luck niggas.
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yo uppin dis battle.... get dis shit ova wit ppl :)
plz no DR choose who had da best verse not who has da most friends 2 vote.... |
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whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thats a recycled verse you bum you spit that in a battle already you aint no mc giovanni :cussing: |
i wasnt feelin giovani it was a bit confusin but i lked how you used that off like my structure line
708 did pretty good he had some wordplay and actually made an effort but the noob thing is played out but you still beat him v/708 |
they say you get what you look up to...for you it's the heaven... .................i aint even good at dice and craps, but i'm rollin on 7 5/10 you from the u.p. kid, don't ever try to fuck with the dirty Italy... ................and when he says "you can't see me"...take it literally 5/10 i'll even give you two the same words, you still couldn't rhyme it... ................cause your lines are left-out, sort of like this alignment 7/10 you far from the hood, more like the trunk, strapped and seated... .................cause your pun died along time ago...right after he did 6/10 yeah, everyone thinkin gio the big underdog at this wack fight?!... ........but cause of me, this thread have more feedback than ya mic 6/10 since when did noobs know who got skillz nobody PAY attentin too you, you just like BILLZ 6/10 he said in bitch slapped dat i talk, 2 much shit if skillz was money homie, then you sure u aint rich 5/10 u act like u the noob superhero, savin noobs from me noobman is what they'd call ya, but u still just a noob 2 me 6/10 20-minus 20 equals you, dats an equation (20-20=0) watch dis nigga feed of my verse like birds re-gurgitatin 7/10 giovoni from italy and still aint got no spice in his verse if i have 2 i'd battle him twice 2 make him work 7/10 this came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay my vote~~~~~~708 |
uppin.
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uppin 4 some vtes plz
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708 jus cuz hes betta punching and he raps like a true g
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