uppin 4 more votes

uppin 4 votes

Uppin Whut Da Fukk Is Wrong With U Niggaz And Da Votin Shit Damm

ayo uppin 4 votes. come on. dont sleep on this shit

aight... that line bout halle berry was sayin u couldnt get any pussy marv... you know cos shes got that movie comin out???

but yeah...

ya both came hard on this... str8 had nice wordplay n punches.. flow was kinda wierd though.. marv ya had decent wordplay n punches, n nice personals.. good flow too...

i reckon my vote goes to marv... not d/r or hate or anythin i was just feelin his verse more... str8 ya verse was nice.. n some of ya lines made me laugh.. but get way more personal.

v/ marv

okay goodlookin now uppin 4 some more votes....and dat halle berry line still didn't make any sense

uppin 4 votes

uppin 4 votes

str your ending aint rhyme and your only good punch was the halle berry shit 4/10 your struture was bad very bad and hard to follow
marv you aint do much better but you had a good struture and the only personal in the battle which was ok4/10 your vocab was good but you need to elevate still you get the vote here





vote on my shits honest and it comes back dr voters are banned

^^^wow dude i still need da elevate??? i mean thank u 4 ya vote but just dont be talkin crazee uppin 4 more votes tho

uppin 4 votes

str8 hood gets this even no both of yall was ight 6 out of 10 and marvouls had no punch lines not that maatter they was botty

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MARVOLoUsJ1009
structure is pretty good...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow was on target...u had tight multis...wordplay was also tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

str8_hood
strucutre is pretty nice as well...flow is on target as well...no multis...wordplay was tight...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had a stable flow...both had tight wordplay...neither had good personals...MARVOLoUsJ1009 had more multis...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...MARVOLoUsJ1009 gets my vote..

VOTE - MARVOLOUSJ1009

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is dis dude fukkin serious???? yo str8 u gon accept dat vote dunny??/

Uhh.

I dont see whats wrong with my vote.

As it shows the breakdown of the battle.