duh duh duh DOPENESS...haha nice OM...feelin the topic of course....flow was good but choppy in places...no big flaws...jus sum adivce to even ur syllables out sum so the flow is erfection...gotta love ur OM's lol....hit uo mine...called Dead Beliefs

Yeah....this was pretty nice. Not your best, but still pretty good anyways. For advice, look up.....

Thanks fam... Just a lil piece to show what only one of our members can do in 15-20 minutes...

Upping...

whatever
 

"unless you think you can spit better,put something together pussy."


I've already posted two cuts off tha up n comin' LP - "Locked Down N lovin' It" - they're further down this board.

^Because your whack and no one will check it and you've probably upped it to the max already...

wack?
 

naa son - i never even touched it to up it. only about 3 people even checked it out.

"Pwease somebody please read my lovely little rhyme and then post a reply saying how much ooo like it - pweeaaase"

I ain't into that faggit shit like y'all. that's the only post you see on this board, along with "uppin/\" cos nobody ever replies.

Straight up bunch of kids

you an' yo crew's wack - a streiht up bunch of soft kids who need people to tell them how good they wackkk rhyme is