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VA: nice flow...good structure, good personals and a decent wordplay. Could of had a betta opening but its st8 cuzz u had a nice ending. Plus u had some solid punches
Kronuz: Many stretched lines, no good structure at all. U need to fet in a betta flow and find a rhyme scheme.But u did have some aiight punches and some good multis. Vote goes 2........VA Keep at it my niggs return da fav....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344 |
ima have to give this one to VA... his punches werent as funny but he was more personal and he had better structure n flow
kronuz ur shyt was funny as hell but ur lines were stretched and ur structure and flow fell of at the end so jus keep ur shyt goin like u did in the beginning.... o n VA... nice closer too v/ VA |
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