i neva voted u told me da polls were closed@xxxtasy i would of voted 4 u simply cuz he broke da rules but w/e luv ya holla back

gud
 

gud spit xxtacy,............u getin beta....
nice struc n sum ok punches..
peace.

ok thanx............

uppin please

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyy

vote this bitch yo so it closes up

uppin peeps PLEASE!!!

This battle was wack ass fuck

Xtasy your shit was friggin lame, if MATW actually knew how to battle you would get ripped

Xtasy your shit didnt even ryme that good
retards and lizards doeasnt fuckin ryme
lok

^^^u just a fucking hater cos i didnt vote for u in ya battle.....by the fucking way dont drop fucked up posts in herre is ya aint down to vote for one of the fucking competorors dork.....u'ld do me a fav..cos this thread is already filled with bullshits (xcept my verse) we dont need more in herre..fool...thanx


uppin this bitch yo

uppin peeps please VOTE...

i'll return the favour..promise.....

please vote

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137767
Vote on that like your sig says.

Mulit: XxXtasy
Structure: XxXtasy
Personals: XxXtasy
Flow: xXtasy
Meta's: XxXtasy
WordPlay: XxXtasy

yup this was a walk over however Matw shows decent potential and could ge alot better if he does some elevating..
vote.. XxXtasy
pz.

^^thanx

uppin

ok ma good flow and struture no personals and no good punches or wordplay.x weak puches but at least you had um good wordplay flow and struture you hit with harder disses and that gave you the vote

^^thanx


uppinnnnnnn

for fucksake yo please vote



pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


uppin

aight tis how it is this battle was ok but Mat extend ur lines and work on ya structure
XXX ur opener was kinda weak

i got a lame ass mc on my ass trying to bring me down
but you cant touch me,yet alone my crown
(not a good enough opener it looks like u cut some of the line off)

so stop trying,sit in your hole and cower
cuz im unbreakable,think of me as the tower
(Dont say hole its kinda gay and what tower)

now here we come to your final hour
so forget the game and move on ya coward
(pretty good ending) overall- 5/10

XXX

Taking a look at this fools posts…u’ld notice he a retard,
U diss him he gets confused..his brain is just like a lizards
son,u battleing me has put an end to ur kiddy dreams........
cos i eat up weak mc's & my spits gon make you scream
(Nice punch line on ur second bar)


ur shit didnt make sense..you fucking dumb..boy no offense
u shudn't have insisted on spitting first,cos u just a lil twerp
ur structure really sucks..i think its hight time u duck
and u so outta luck,therre aint no room for an ugly fuck
(1st bar didnt rhyme nice touch on da 2nd)


the rules said 10 lines..but i c u too foolish and blind
u r lyrically slacking boo..guess its too much of jafool
im dont with this fake,cos he nothing but a hoecake
(nice ending where told him 10 lines) 8/10

v/XXX

XXX got this hands down...

Mat, you came off weak from the beginning and it didn't get any better as it went along. where's the word play? multi's? personals and punches? like the other kat said, you can rhyme but you seriously need to elevate ya game. Get some better vocab and "think outside the box". try using double meanings... but slow down killer... fix that structure first before you start wrecking ya brain on everything else.

XXX... you had an overall better structure... still needs work, though. Personals and punches were better. I found no wordplay or multi's in ya verse but it was still better than Mat's.

For the record... Matw usually replies with a rhyme... i've seen his other posts... I actually liked his response a lot better than his original battle rhyme! ( I also think it's good that he takes the opportunity to keep practicing in his responses ... but that won't win the battles if you drop weak in them.)

v/XXX