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eph 07-30-04 05:39 PM

femcee:-


a leak, mouth droolin's a hoax?..
...him just spittin's a joke.

why you need 30 minutes to post?..
...when your just gonna follow up with prewritten votes.


idk what intense effect is bitching about, thats a hot line.

its creative ( b/c usually ppl are takin bout prewritten verse, but your dissin him with a line about prewritten votes, thats creative and hot.)
structure was good, punches were good, first line was a good opener for the finishing punch. nice bar........9.3/10.......thats vet stuff.


tourn:


poor bitch..havin high dollar hopes..but her skills spent
cause i'm stompin bruises on her frame, so she'll really rep blue-print


nice punch, good structure, but femcee had a lil more word play and her prewritten vote line killed you. but it was a nice match up, good competition.

vote: femcee

return the favor on one of my battles.. ill be bac with the link.

D-ICED 07-31-04 07:34 AM

tourn had a better punch that line was gansta and slick but femcee line was slick too just in a puchline battle you gotta have that mike tyson swing and for that you need to disrespect hard and tourn did that and gets my vote

femcee 07-31-04 02:14 PM

your wack, uppin.

Yvonne 07-31-04 02:30 PM

i give this to feemcee cos her opener was better and her punches hit harder than the other dude's.....and hey rhymes were better.........but feemcee avseen better drope of urs...

vote feemcee

return favour in my 2 battles thanx....link below

tourn 07-31-04 05:07 PM

i'll take femcee's line on someone who voted against her..."your wack, uppin."

Alphabetix 07-31-04 10:37 PM

wow femcee fukn knocked out tourn hands down my votes for her. Tourn had two lines to write and they didnt even rhyme

return the favour honest on my battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138127

tourn 08-01-04 12:17 PM

^this dude's a fuckin joke...spent/print..doesn't rhyme...rofl shows how femceee is gonna win this shit newbie voters..uppin

tourn 08-02-04 02:14 PM

uppin........................................again ....

femcee 08-03-04 12:49 PM

need votes, i will return the favor...just drop a link.


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