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^- lol... why dont you to battle... i wanna see this haha... upp....
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Voted For: KroNuz
this battle def goes to Kronuz his opener n closer were funny as hell n hit hard too. J-trooper was ight but his rhymes sounded forced like he was just trynna use multisyllable words to sound good v= Kronuw return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: J_Trooper
10-1 still standin glarein at ya fuckin entire Administration my vote's.... over toppelz yours add up them Caculations 9/10 I'll piss on your Ambitions-side kick ya Remainings Feel me- Kronuz aka Milli Vanilly bitch stop Faking 9.1/10 Neva will your Hopes and Wishes turn you into Competition Quote my Significance Defenition's-ya punches aint Deliverin 9/10 Geletin resembles ya Interior im established respect ya Superior Im Domination. U not even Nomination i peeped the fear in You 8.7/10 Im the best in Deleviring Threats the best in Particular U couldnt feel true Lyricism if u held onto Nas's Testiculars 9.2/10 Overall verse 9/10 |
This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
oK.. THE FIRST BAR IS OK, NO REAL PUNCH THO
2ND, NO REAL PUNCH, JUST INSULTS 3RD, COO RHYMES, JUST NO PUNCH.. 4TH.. NO REAL PUNCH, AND IT DIDN'T RHYME 5TH BAR.. NICE CLOSER, THE BEST PART OF YOUR VERSE.. 7/10 |
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kRONUZ WON THIS IN MY EYES.. HE CAME WITH A PUNCH IN ALMOST EVERY BAR.. HE CAME WITH MPRE CREATIVITY ANND HAD A GOOD STRUCTURE.. V/KRONUZ
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It Won't Let Me Vote Anymore...
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Voted For: KroNuz
Kronuz--I like ya flow on this one. good hitting punches, but a sorry closer. don't forget where you're able to post these verses for other heads to vote on em. you sposed to be battlin ya opponent not the board, anyhow I think you had the edge. J-Trooper, stretched lines...the first line threw me off things. I laughed at the closer.....but yeah. I think you could shorten the lines a bit....and go for some multis in a verse. |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
J_Trooper structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... KroNuz structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice multis...wordplay was alright...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had some nice multis...neither had good personals...J_Trooper had the better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...J_Trooper gets my vote... VOTE - J_TROOPER Please return the favor with an honest vote on this battle - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138279 Thanx. |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
flow:i felt J had a betta flow 2 his den KRONUZ did his was kinda off metas:J he didn't have many but KRONUZ had none dat i can see punches:J didn't really get wut KRONUZ was tryna say multi:neither overall:J he had more punches n metas neither had multis but da flow were koo but J's flow was better v/J_TROOPER |
yo vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs 2h2l http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487 ice pick http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137970 peace |
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