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Voted For: phatinum

man ice pick took this 1 all the way phat man u need too land harder punches and finish the rymes u started other then that ur not bad but i gotta go with ice

v/ice-pick

ahh wtf i wanted to vote for ice pick ice just go report this and say i made a mistake theyll fix it bro

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Voted For: Ice Pick

not a pretty verse but you took it with punches n better structure,your punches were straight,need more complexity in them,yes your structure was better but still looks terrible..work on that.....pc......phat....still need ta elevate alot kid..your gettin better i suggest you battle noobs ta elevate your skills..
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Voted For: Ice Pick

this wasn't even close...

phatinum... straight garbage... no structure, no punches, no meta's, no multi's, no style what-so-ever! don't even bother elevatin'... just quit while you're ahead.

Ice... it didn't really take much to beat this guy... structure alone would have done it. punches were better, structure was cool, shyt rhymed, no personals (except for saying his rhymes were wack and he chose you for his first post)... hands down... v/ice

Voted For: Ice Pick

hold the fuck up.did phatinums verse make any sense or rhyme at all?n e ways vote for ice for being twenty times better in every category. ice work on the structure a lil more and you shouldnt be battlin herbs like this, u got a good record. no hate cuz im sure every body else felt the same. hit up the links in the sig. one!