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Voted For: Word processor
word good struture but your flow was type hard to catch.your vocab and punches need some work and your disses were ok.grace your flow is too strech and your or your structure need serious help.you had no punches at all and no good disses your wordplay and vocab were also lacking so word gets this with a better verse |
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don't sleep on this shit lets get some dam votes
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Voted For: Word processor
opener - word, haha funny shit... closer - Graceful, wasnt really feelin Words punches - Word, gracefuls were played, not original personals - Graceful, most of his verse was all personals metas - Word, had better metas in my opinion multis - Word, had'em in first 2 bars vocab - word, gracefuls biggest word was elevator...which is what he should be doin (elevating) Graceful: Most of your stuff was played, and the stuff that wasnt was kinda stupid cause most of your punches obviously revolved around you reading his profile...you can do better than that, elevate with multis/metas, vocab/especially punches. Word: you took this one man...I felt your verse was a lot stronger because you has great structure, multis, and way harder punches. Elevate with better personals and maybe harder punches, good job tho man...props... |
please leave vote with honest opinion and leave non-DQable Feedback as I did for you...help me close this shit man... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141105
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Voted For: Word processor
Ok, both styles were a little simple, but Word processor came with better punches - I like that reference to Dave Chappelle (the wrap it up box). Graceful, your punches didn't really connect - they didn't end the same way you set 'em up. But no hate though, good battle you 2. Reutrn the favor, honest votes only: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141704 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142260 |
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