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50Cal. 08-10-04 04:23 PM

Voted For: Word processor

word good struture but your flow was type hard to catch.your vocab and punches need some work and your disses were ok.grace your flow is too strech and your or your structure need serious help.you had no punches at all and no good disses your wordplay and vocab were also lacking so word gets this with a better verse

Tycoon 08-11-04 06:10 PM

uppin

Tycoon 08-12-04 08:37 PM

uppin

Tycoon 08-14-04 01:45 PM

don't sleep on this shit lets get some dam votes

Spektikul 08-14-04 02:08 PM

Voted For: Word processor

opener - word, haha funny shit...
closer - Graceful, wasnt really feelin Words
punches - Word, gracefuls were played, not original
personals - Graceful, most of his verse was all personals
metas - Word, had better metas in my opinion
multis - Word, had'em in first 2 bars
vocab - word, gracefuls biggest word was elevator...which is what he should be doin (elevating)

Graceful: Most of your stuff was played, and the stuff that wasnt was kinda stupid cause most of your punches obviously revolved around you reading his profile...you can do better than that, elevate with multis/metas, vocab/especially punches.

Word: you took this one man...I felt your verse was a lot stronger because you has great structure, multis, and way harder punches. Elevate with better personals and maybe harder punches, good job tho man...props...

Spektikul 08-14-04 02:10 PM

please leave vote with honest opinion and leave non-DQable Feedback as I did for you...help me close this shit man... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141105

Nynth Degree 08-14-04 02:15 PM

Voted For: Word processor

Ok, both styles were a little simple, but Word processor came with better punches - I like that reference to Dave Chappelle (the wrap it up box). Graceful, your punches didn't really connect - they didn't end the same way you set 'em up. But no hate though, good battle you 2.

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