This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

that was iiaght i give it a 5 out of 10...... so do better

Voted For: Mimesis

this was ova efor it started...
M. u'r first bar alone killed hes whole verse straight up, u had gopod creativeness nice punches and flow was ok *work on ya flow a little more but u'r offical with u'r stuff thou nice drop man but u could of saved it for someone better,

look it here *brother* u'r flow was the best thing u had going for u seriously.. u'r creativeness was weak and lame and simple think outta the box then the simple rhyme, your punches well there was no punches try working on those and u had no wordplay like i said the best thing u had going for u was flow try to get a little more complex u will get better in time i have been elevating my-self as u see i aint got the best record..... but elevating....

this was a 187 someone call the cops'

vote: Mimesis