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Voted For: $ Wordman $
Yo dis was a weak battle but Wordman man had it. He had da better wordplay, punchez, Opener and clower. Not nockin D you did good too...punchez was jus aiight...had a better structure, an tha closer sucked but you did aiight. v/wordman vote honestly on dis battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138450 |
Voted For: $ Wordman $
So you call the word out, ta battle D-Tain Fist Off, yah gonna Lose yah credit here like ja's Chain 7/10 Bearing Rein on yah soul, You lack the Hook, like a broken candy cane Im Hot like Butane, you Colder then Mccain 6/10 Devouring yah pride out of yah body, as if i Ripped yah Jugalar Vein! As you pore over this Text, You begin To Feel Useless like a Cafs's Brain, 7/10 Your Self As a Boy, is Eroding Like Stuck in Acid Rain.. you'd have a better chance of Making it Big, doing a Du-o with Shania Twain... 8/10 like an exit wound, my verse will leave yours ripped open.... like a baby swallowin' a food token, your left chokin'... 7/10 your punches wudnt hurt me, if they had on brass knuckles... the lid to your can of dopeness, is tighter than a belt buckle... 6/10 my shit is fresh, $ man word $ spits shit you prolly already heard... check his battle wit Riff Raff, he Says RB not RV like he's bit the verse... 7/10 your structure is weak, like a bridge in an earth quake, or twister... when i take the win, it'll be stuck on your record like a blister... 7/10 comparing you to a bullet, you come out, and you gone fast.... and when we find u hours later, your still in a mans ass.... 5/10 Came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay My vote~~~~~Word~~~~~~~~~ |
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Voted For: D-Tain
ima have to give this to D-train his punchers were wayy better and rhymed better also wordman's flow was just too basic is all return teh favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138575 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408 |
Voted For: D-Tain
yo detain took this one, he came better with the flow, and punches, and he also used better vocab, as a real MC would do, word man was rappin bout acid raid, and shainia twain. that was played. vote - d- tain |
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